Very Good, I like your style of writing, can't wait to read some more! (I'm admin ~Clove on "Fire is catching! And if we burn, you burn with us!")
Loved how you began and ended this chapter. It really drew me in. Can't wait to read more! Keep up the amazing work! :D
Really great story line. Def unique. I love the characterization. How Daniel is shown to be dead. Can't wait for the flashback.
Interesting opening...lots of great details in his POV and very emotionally charged. Well done!
Good god. I'n astonished. I wasn't expecting such...magnificence. The details, the word choice, the /everything/. Amazing.
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