"Why Sugarcoat It?" by HauntedMuck http://www.wattpad.com/story/1224287-why-sugarcoat-it
Critique by @glittergirl
I fell in love with Aspen from the very start. She's sarcastic, antisocial and overall a "don't screw with me" person. Sort of reminds me of me :) Aspen has a group of friends who she somewhat reluctantly hangs out with every day. There's her best friend who tends to be a little bossy- Kali. Then there's her other friend, Nicole, and their respective boyfriends Ryan and Andrew. Do you notice the pattern? Aspen is kind of the fifth wheel. True, she really doesn't care, she hates PDA and she doesn't believe in love... at all. Aspen's parents you will find are frequently MIA and unfortunately she has a queen bitch for a sister (excuse my language). With a life like that? And nothing to look forward to, I might add! Who knows what will happen? Read and see.
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