Let Me Go

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HONESTLY, I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY.

Okay I lied.

It's really good! The description rocks, punctuation rocks, the beginning is catchy. There's only spacing errors you might want to check out. Also, I like the pace. It's easy to follow.

You asked me, all the way in 2012:

"Is this story worth continuing?"

The answer:

Heck yes.

~Julian

Date: 24 June 2014

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