The Boy Next Door

Chapter 1

 So basically I have changed this first sentence/paragraph so many times(this hopefully is the last time) :P Anywho I just read through this chapter and realised how immature it sounded I am probably going to edit it - a little heads up for you all. I never knew my writing was so poor in year 8/9th grade (which ever way you know it), all I know is I was 13, no excuse though because there are some brilliant young writers out there. I had also been influenced greatly by slang, I'm defo going to change that ! Anyway now im just rabbling :3

Happy now guys,the spacing has been sorted out ? :D

Anyway, first story , first try so be nice...But not too nice. :P

Peace.

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Chapter 1

Beep Beep Beep Beep. 5.00 am

 "Get the fuck outta your room, you little piece of shit. Your just like your fucking mother and you gonna do everything I say just like she did!"

I just stayed in the bed staring into space. Ever since my mum died it had been like this. My drunken step-father. I loved my dad but then he was killed in a drive by on his business trip in America. My life was a total down turn since that day! My mum then found herself a new man only a month later. After another 2 months i had gained a step-father. Despite my mother being all smiles I could tell that deep inside she was not happy at all. A year later I found my mum in the bath swinging from my old skipping rope. Beside her was a suicide note. It said:

 'Honey, you have found this which tells me you've seen me. I’m sorry that I had to do this but life became very hard and I couldn't stand looking after you, you are too much like your father and I loved him much more than you... so I had to go and join him...I can’t say I’m sorry I left you because you became quite a pain after Christopher came into my life. Well...bye now'

 I had lost all the will to live that day it was very hard on me being only13. It crushed me that my mother would think such a thing of me. It just didn't seem like my mother to write like this.

"Did you hear me; I will bust this mudafuckin door open kmt." He shouted. I jumped in fright and came out opening the door carefully. He stared at me and kissed his teeth. Ever since mum died he took custody of me first acting all caring and sweet until one day BAM he started treating me like shit. I expect this was the day when he got the will. Since my father died everyone from his families side stopped interacting with our family. They blamed my mother for his death. My mum had not talked to her family since she ran away from home. So there was no one else but me and my older sister.

 "You think coz this was your mother’s house you can take control, get your fucking roles straight coz I’m de boss here not you"

 "Okay"

 He grabbed my hair and pushed me into the wall "Don't get rude to me"

 "I wasn't" I gasped. I heard a bit of my hair start tearing out from the roots.

 "Stupid fool, go do what you were made for, you'd better be done before I come back"

 "Yes Chris" I muttered

 "What did you call me?"

 "I mean yes dad"

 "Good" He then left slamming the door. I walked into the bath room and stared into the mirror. Everyone seemed to abandon me in my life. Like my sister, she left soon after mum died. My 'best friend' ignored me through the toughest time in my life. My Ex cheated on me. Could life get any worse? I walked out and tidied the whole house. I was a maid basically. Cleaning every day at the crack of dawn to late at night. But it didn't matter because I didn't have a social life anymore. Around 8.00 I had finished. I took my school work and started on it. I didn't go on Facebook or msn or whatever people go on coz I really don't have any friends. When it was 8.30 I stopped it was time to get ready for school. I just had to finish my work at school as usual. I slipped into my ripped dolly shoes and took my school bag and came out the house. As i was walking down the street I noticed the boy from the house across the road standing at his front door just in his boxers and vest top. A really pretty girl came out the house and kissed him. He noticed me and winked, I shyly smiled back at him and the girl. She screwed me and laughed pointing downwards. I quickly looked down and saw that my toe was poking out of the front of my shoe. I looked back at the couple again and they were both laughing. I quickly walked off with my head faced down. Already a bad start to the day. I arrived late to school.