Sides of Our Society Poem Book 1

Unsolved Thoughts

I finally decided that it was time to edit/rewrite this poem book slowly. I kept the unedited/old version so hopefully you'll notice how far my writing has come. Good luck.

UPDATED VERSION

Chapter 1 : Unsolved Thoughts

You're so gentle and sweet

So gentle indeed

The breathe you blow across my face

As you pull me into a warm embrace

Captivates my heart

my mind

my body

my life

I feel you look at me with disgust

And that look makes my heart bust

But after I leave and you've realized what you've done

Your conscious burns like the billion degree sun

"Nobody's the same"

"Anyone can break"

But not everyone knows how much they can take

I just realized how much I could take

As my will shattered like a million pieces of glass

On that priceless green grass

After you left did you make sure I was still well?

Every night I'd stare at the wall where I continuously fell

The hands that didn't rest

Upon my face and chest

Was supposed to guide me to the best

But there were no screams of, yes

OLD/UNEDITED VERSION

Chapter 1 : Unsolved Thoughts

I feel you look at me with disgust

The words you say,

Doesnt make anything go away.

Everyday is the same.

Anyone can break

Shattering like a million peices of glass.

On that priceless green grass

After you left was everything still good?

They stare at the wall, were you once stood!

The lies you told

The anger they trully felt

Haunts them every night

Who in there right mind, would still put up a fight.