Things I didn't like:
* You really need a editor sweetie. I understand that English isn't your first langauge so, I will just critique the story for you.:)
Things I did like:
* The girl isn't a self loving skinny little blonde. She has a few issues that people can relate to and she wants to break free. I like that.
* Everyone's emotions fit really well together. Sometimes you will gread a book that has so many emotions and such that it drives you insane. Your's are very sorted and have their own details.
* Your details are great. The way you describe everything is wonderful.
* I really like your cover. It shows how women can be beautiful even with their looks covered. I think more people need to see that.
