Poetry Battle!
Rules:
1.u have to take at least one line from the previous poem and put it into ur own poem
2.it can't be offense to the other poem or it's creator
These poems were made by my friend Amanda and I. It was based on a real life situation and each poem contained a message for the other. Hope you like them xD
Feelings-Vonni
Why is it so hard too understand
So hard to make sense of everything swirling around me
To make sense of all these feelings dancing around me
My Feelings
What do they mean
What are they trying to tell me
Why are they in some kind of language I cannot understand
Etched onto my heart in marks that are alien to me
I act on my feelings
But how do I act without knowing what they are
Torn with indesicion
Thought I felt a spark
Or was it just a fragment in my imagination
Thought I felt a pull
Or was it something I wanted to feel
My feelings
Someone explain them to me
Show me the secret of cracking this code
Because I want to know how I really feel
Or if I feel at all
My Feelings
So mysterious to me
So clear to others
I want to know
I want to say
I feel.....
IT-Amanda
nothing but an akward pull thats just a false truth thats made 2
believe is tru and for that reason i can't feel anything else ... or can i ?
but if only if i tried to make this all come tru . a sweet misery that just pulls
me in farther down but it all just turns into a lie a lie !
and all i want to feel is this stupid emotion to be ripped out of
my being so i can never love YOU again
and yeah now to me ur not even classified as a human
more animal than man .
ravaging my poor heart into ur own
twisted mind games
a stupid stupid desicion to make because
after i did al i mentioned ur still there
controlling me not able to make a move and come out
with it ... and until now i HATE everything that You caused .
IT
You-Vonni
Ur still there
Controlling me, not able to make a move and come out with it ...
And until now i HATE everything that You caused
The Pain
The Misery
The Indecision
But you don't only cause evil things
You also give me...
The Happiness
The Excitement
LOVE
So do I accept everything that you are; good and bad
Or do I let the hateful things go along with the things I love
Hold you close or push you away
Anguish or Happiness
Hate or Love
You or YOU
Dream-Amanda
You or YOU
i decide neither and why ?
just beacuse you bring me the pain the misery the love.
and yeah your love is just a pain. something i just can't deal with . you try to keep me in a box or is that just wat you want me to beleive .
im trying to break free but you keep coming back to me
in a dream.
and i hope thats all you are.love. just a dream to that this blissful nightmare can be over soon .
And if you don't leave i'll just have to ink you in on my schedule not that you'll fit just a another problem to deal with
A bug on my windshield an disturbance on my inner peace
You weren't planned but here you come
26 days till your here.
26 Days-Vonni
Your love is just a pain.
Something i just can't deal with
Something I push away
YOU'RE something i push away
It's just too much
So i decided to let you go
Too save myself
You might think I'm selfish but really I'm not
You think it's easy for me?
Well, your wrong
It's harder for me than it is for you
26 days until your here
Until I see your face, your smile,
Until my heart either breaks or leaps
Dreading the Day
Can't wait for it to come
Can't wait for YOU to come
Done-Amanda
Ok so yeah i CAN'T wait for you to come. Yeah i said it .. I LOVE YOU ! Yeah incredulous ?? Yeah i thought so .. im happy but there's still that stupid ping of guilt that i just can't get rid of. so now who wins ??/ O yeah their name's FATE
i wont deny anything anymore only your identity ... for now .
I can't wait for that 26th day .. just a look may make me faint but ti's worth it
And i'm done with everything .. no more denial... just you,love.
Hope you liked the battle!
