HEY!
It's been a long time. I thought second semester of senior year would be super easy and I'd have two million hours a day to write, but haha, joke's on me because that's not what happened. So, I didn't update this story at all. Super sorry.
Besides not having time to write, I stopped working on this because I had TONS of plot holes that messed with the rest of the story. I couldn't continue writing without correcting them, so I revised Part One of Olive Juice. The changes aren't too drastic. The plot is relatively the same. There are a few differences that are new and need to be understood. For example, government officials are now called Serfs. Overall, it's the same Olive Juice, but just better.
Now, I can continue writing with ease and since I'm heading off to college in the fall, my summer is 100% free and I will actually update. Not kidding.
So, if you're an old reader or a new one, I appreciate reading this far and waiting this long. Prepare, the updates are coming! Thanks!
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Olive Juice
Science Fictionη. olive juice [ol-iv-joos] a term commonly mistaken for the words "i love you" when silently mouthed to another * * * Four people. Two boys. Two Girls. One year. A Companionship. In a society where prejudice and exclusion are the roots of all evil...