ok i know you are disappointed that this is not a chapter but i have some news
it is a good news or bad news depending on your reactions on this chapter
so the thin is my old file of this story is recovered and i re-read the draft and found a lot of changes in the previous one and this one
so..
here is what i am asking you to do
select if i should go with the original draft or the new draft
to make it easy for you i will give you the key points without spoilers of both drafts so you can decide
please note that this is continuation from chapter 29 which means it is from chapter 30
DRAFT 1:-
after finding out the identity of felicity being Schmidt Eva in in a complicated feeling,
this draft is mainly based or focused on her feelings towards Neron and felicity at the start and her romantic life with some action from enemy mafia which she is able to win with a secret weapon
this draft starts chapter 30 from her advancing from a cold hearted person to learning to open up to others except Angelo and finding herself and dealing with her emotions which she never did from the time she became a mafia boss
she starts to feel different about herself and is confused if these new feelings towards her family and new friends are good for her or opening up to family is a weak point for others to take advantage of her
so it basically deals with her feelings and as son as it is half solved a bomb is thrown at her office in the shape of an envelop having details about Angelo's memories which clearly puts her in a shock
DRAFT 2:-
this draft mainly focuses on Angelo and his memories and the new enemy/ally the come fce to face
after finding felicity's identity that she is a Schmidt Eva decided to push her off and focus on new case that is restoring Angelo's memories and in order for that to happen she is needed to be away from her home for quiet some time
as she is away from home the family starts to notice how much Angelo misses her and try to contact her but fail
she drifts apart from her family that leaves Angelo devastated and stats to fall into depression as he has never been away from her till this time
Eva in a different country faces some trouble and is in a situation of deciding to go back to family or to stay and find out exactly what happened in the past
this draft thas almost none to nothing of her romantic side as it is mainly focused on her becoming a stronger person than she ever was before
DRAFT 3:-
none of the above write a new draft
comment here if you have any ideas that you think will be nice to see it in the progressing story
(you can comment whatever you want even if it dosent make any sense or any random emoji to support your answer)
FOR DRAFT 1 COMMENT HERE
FOR DRAFT 2 COMMENT HERE
FOR DRAFT 3 COMMENT YOUR IDEAS HERE
as my exams are completed i HAVE LOTS OF TIME IN MY HANDS so as soon as i get more than 24 comments on which draft to do i will start typing immediately
so the faster people express their point of views the faster you are to get a update
also if the comments and votes of this chapter surprises me you may get 5 chapters as bonus for all the patience and love you have shown for this book until now
also there will be a QUESTION AND ANSWER SESSION FOR THIS BOOK COMMING OUT SOON
WHO IS EXICTED TO HAVE A FUN AND INTERRACTIVE SESSION WITH ME WHERE YOU CAN ASK WHATEVER QUESTIONS YOU HAVE ABOUT ME AND THE BOOK AND THE QUESTIONS HAVE NO LIMITATIONS
YOU ARE FREE TO ASK ANYTHING
PLEASE DO NOT ASK QUESTIONS RIGHT AWAY IN THIS CHAPTER AS I WILL ADD A NEW CHAPTER WHERE YOU CAN BEGIN ASKING ME QUESTIONS
SOOOOOOOOOO
KEEP YOUR QUESTIOND AND POV OF DRAFT 1 OR DRAFT 2 OR DRAFT 3 READY
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