Will Rewrite (Work In Progress)

Don't Judge a Girl by her Looks (Chapter 1)

Chapter 1

     [Hayley’s  P.O.V.]

       *Beep* *Beep* *slam*

      “Urgh.. It’s too early it’s just 5:00 am I’m going back too sleep”

*knock*

“Who is it? I’m still sleepy come back later,” I let out a little groan so he would have a clue that who ever that is shouldn’t bother me.

I heard Ryan say“Hayley wake up please,” he’s my big brother he’s 2 yrs. older than me he has pale skin, and rosy cheeks just like mine, brown eyes, he’s always energetic, fun to be w/, has nice voice, and he’s taller than me.

“No” I replied then covered my face w/ my pillow

“You are so dead once I get inside your room”

I heard Kevin pleaded “Please princess open up,” He’s my oldest brother he’s already 20 yrs. old he has pale skin, rosy cheeks just like us and sky blue eyes like me, he’s taller than Ryan, he’s very sporty, he’s actually a player no girl can resist my bro. Well, he uses his nice voice, perfect smile, and the skill to play the guitar to ask the girl he wants. He’s such a sweet talker actually he almost asked out every single girl at school but even though he never let his grades became low and of course both of them never lets me go alone by my own, they’re so totally over protective. Even though it seems they’re over reacting towards me a lot it’s cool ‘coz I never felt lonely or troubled w/ them ‘coz every time I have problems they are always there to help, comfort and cheer me up. At least I know that they really cared for me.

“Urgh, didn’t I tell you too stop calling me ‘princess’?”I went out of bed to look what they’re waking me for. When I opened the door I saw them both holding up gifts and they both said “Happy Birthday Hayley”

I was shocked that they remembered. While I was just standing there, they put the gifts down then Kevin began tackling me to my bed then next Ryan when we were all at my bed they began tickling me.“Stop. Please” I said between laughs, they stopped after 3 minutes, we all sat and everyone became quiet so I broke the silence “I can’t believe you still remembered my Birthday”

“How could we forget, princess”

I rolled my eyes and let out a chuckle and said “Oh and thanks” then I took both of their gifts

Ryan said “open mine first”

So I took the one that looked like a long rectangular box so I began ripping the wrapper open, when I opened the box it was a skateboard so I said “OMG, Thanks a lot Ryan” then I began to hug Ryan

“No prob. Princess I know it would be pretty useful since your skateboard looks pretty worn out”

I looked at my skateboard and began to blush

Then Kevin handed his gift and said “Well, here’s mine I hope you like it Princess”

I looked at him curiously then I took it, it’s also rectangular but much bigger than the box unlike the skateboard’s, so it can’t be another skateboard.

“Go ahead open it”

So I started opening it. It was a new guitar when I saw it, my smile grew because I thought that it was just one of his pranks.

“Why don’t you like it?”

“No, I love it.. I thought this was just one of your pranks”

Then I hugged him and he kissed me on my forehead and I said “Thanks a lot guys”

Ryan said “Group hug!”