WHAT WAS HIS MISTAKE

Autorstwa Swethalove

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what happens when our swara will marry sanskaar and get to know that he is disabled in one way ........ will... Więcej

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Autorstwa Swethalove

Hello people how r u all i am just back
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A Big lavish room is shown its interior is so beautiful but it didnt have any light except a dim lamp.....

a slender figure was shown standing in the dim light...

The person was staring at a big photo frame hung on the wall...

The whole wall was full of small and big photo frames

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Swara!!!

she was staring at picture and carrasses it lovingly...

the photo was...

A lone tear escaped her eye

swara(monolouge):
4 years sanskar, it has been almost 4 years u left Me and Ansh....
I am still unable to trace u...
i hv told many agencies and appointed detective teams to find u but unsuccessful...
Why i did this to u sanskar y did i hurt u so much...
I separated u frm Ansh and broke ur heart by my rejection....
I AM SORRY SANSKAR I AM SORRY!!!PLZZ FORGIVE ME SANSKAR PLZZ COME BACK I LOVE YOU  PLZZ COME BACK PLZZ WE NEED U

She sits down and cries clutching a shirt in her hand, She kisses it and carasesses it softly and slowly...

it was sanskars shirt....

BOOM

the lights go on and swara immediately wipe her tears  and looked up with a smile on her lips at the figure who came running to her...

she smiled at the person and said

Swara:  ANSH baby u didnt sleep yet?


Ansh looked at her and smiled cutely but then his face turned sad the next second....

Ansh: Mumma wen will papa come i am missing him u said na he will come if a get good marks in my exams see i got a triple star in everything mumma so nw were is papa plzz mumma tell him to come....

Swara lied Ansh on her laps and patted his back...
choking back her tears
She said

Swara: Beta papa will come soon nw it is soon going to be holidays rite so u should be a good boy mumma will be going out on business trips again and again but u should stay without troubling Dada and dadi ok then i will bring ur papa back

Ansh pouted sadly, A tear dropped frm swaras eyes which was unnoticed by Ansh
sadly he hummed

Ansh: hmmm ok(nw brightly) But bring papa soon ok i want to see him...

Swara smiled at her son and made him sleep.
she sighed and lied next to him....
A lone tear escaped her eyes she got lost in her thoughts....

She forced herself to fall asleep and soon succeeded...
But not peaceful sleep....

NEXT MORNING

Swara woke up and got ready to go outside....
She covered ansh comfortably with the blanket...

Swara went down the stairs....
The whole
A lady was sitting inside the ghar mandir wrapped in a shawl...
she was leaning against the foot of lord krishnas idol...

her face was dried with tears....

Swara ran to her aftr taking out her shoes....

swara: Maa what is this again y u come down and sit in here....
y dont u sleep wats wrong Maa i said na i will bring our sanskar back...
hw long hv u been sitting in here han?!....

sujata starts to cry

Sujata: swara beta i cant live in peace i..i..i feel suffocated beta...
imagine(sobs) hw much pain sanskar went thru these years and kept it t..to(sobs) himself
she holds swaras hand and says

sujata: beta plzz bring my son back i will be so thankful to u plzzz

swara also starts to cry....

swara: Maa is he ur son only he is my HUSBAND i will find him for sure and do evrything for him to forgive us....

Swara took sujata to her room and made her lie on the bed and came outside to hv break fast....

she went and sat at the dinning table while looking at the others...
They all looked so happy and were chatting with eachother....

Ansh came down rubbing his eyes cutely...

Ragini looked at him and turned her face feeding her own daughter who was just 3 years old.....

Ansh came and sat on swara's lap....
she smiled seeing her son....

Ansh looked up and saw Laksh who was playing with his baby...
and said

Ansh: laksh papa...

laksh looked up with an angry look while his daughter ritu looked sad and angry as well....

Laksh: Dont call me papa ok i am just ur chotu papa and just call me chachu...
see i hv my own daughter to call me papa so stop this see hw angry ritu is becoming....
(turns back to ritu)
its ok beta dont mind this boy come i will take u to park...

Saying this he went away

Ansh looked hurt and tears rolled down his eyes as he looked at laksh and ritu longingly...

Swara remembered hw sanskar felt hurt seeing Ansh with Laksh and calling him Papa instead of him....

she picked her son and went to the bedroom....
after making him ready...
she took him to the car droping him at school...

Swara went to her office....
Her own office

In these 4 years she become a fashion designer and built her own empire of business...
one of the leading stylist...

she entered her cabin aftr evry1 greeted her...
her cabin was full of sanskars pictures...

She sat on her chair and looked at one of sanskars pic....
she wiped her tears and started looking at some files....

when she recieved a call....

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Swara: hello

op: SSA industries?

swara: yes who is it and hw u r calling me intstead of my reception?...

op: Mam we are frm Gsk music company....

swara: ohh ok

op: Mam our leading singer and voice expert Rockstar Gautam is going to perform in canada for 5 days concert....
so we would like to have a deal with u to design Rockstar Gautam and singer shreya menons outfit.....

Swara: wow thats amazing i would like to sign the deal....

op: thats good

swara: so wen i am i supposed to come...

op: Mam first come to Mumbai then u can leave with our crew next saturday...

swara: ok thanx...

📲📲📲📲📲📲📲📲Call ends📲📲📲📲📲📲📲📲📲📲

Swara sighed and went back to her work.....

while in another Office a man is standing in his cabin showing his back....

A lady enters and said....

lady: Deal fr stylist is finalised sir....

Man: okk
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TOO BE CONTINUED....

PRECAP: SWARA IN MUMBAI

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