Monteverde Academy

By pretty_poison_

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Featured in Wattpad Vampires Dark Romance Reading list. _____ Sixteen year old Verina Theron had it all- she... More

Introduction
Playlist
Chapter-1
Chapter- 2
Chapter-3
Chapter-4
Chapter-5
Chapter-6
Chapter-7
Chapter-8
Chapter-9
Chapter-10
Chapter-11
Chapter-12
Chapter-13
Chapter-14
Chapter-15
Chapter-16
Chapter-17
Chapter-18
Chapter-19
Chapter-20
Chapter-21
Chapter-22
Chapter-23
Chapter-24
Chapter-25
Chapter-26
Chapter-27
Chapter-28
Chapter-29
Chapter-30
Chapter-31
Chapter-32
Chapter-33
Chapter-34
Chapter-35
Chapter-36
Chapter-37
Chapter-38
Chapter-39
Chapter-40
Chapter-41
Chapter-42
Chapter-43
Chapter-44
Chapter-45
Chapter-46
Chapter-47
Chapter-48
Chapter-49
Chapter-50
Chapter-51
Chapter-52
Chapter-53
Chapter-54
Chapter-55
Chapter-56
Chapter-57
Chapter-58
Chapter-59
Chapter-60
Epilogue

Awards and Reviews

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By pretty_poison_

1) Featured in the official Wattpad Vampires Dark Romance Reading list.

2) Winner of 2nd place in the Vampire/ Werewolf genre, Crazy Community Awards

3) Winner of 2nd place in vampire/werewolf genre, The Travel Awards.
Review: A very interesting book, the plot was tight-knit. It reminded me of the movie, Vampire Academy, but the female lead's POV was very intriguing to read, she held me captivated and made me want to read more. Watch for those commas and punctuations but it was a good read.

4) Winner of 1st place in Werewolf/ Vampire Genre, The Pumpkin Spice Awards

Review: This story gives me the Harry Potter vibes. The characters seem too human to be vampires though the character development is good. The plot is well paced(neither too fast not too slow).
The writing style is good. The chapters are short and easy to read. But there are also subtle grammatical errors. The concepts of vampires, slaves and vampire turning human into a vampire like creature is also not new, but I appreciate that you gave them features and new names. Keep writing, good luck!!

5) Winner of 1st place in Werewolf/Vampire Genre, The Kitkat Awards

6) Winner of 1st place in Fantasy Genre,The Sweet Creature awards.

7) Winner of 3rd place in Vampire Genre,The Mystique Awards
Review: Title: 5/5 (it was one of the main aspects which attracted me to the book! It's sounds good and unique!)
Opening: 10/10 (I won't deny how much I enjoyed the opening! It was really fun to read about Verina, and the little details that the author used were superb)
Genre relevance: 5/5 (apt and definitely related to the genre)
Characters: 17/20 ( don't get me wrong. I'm deeply invested in the characters on this book, but the author needs to flesh out the characters a bit more. Maybe elongating the chapters might help)
Plot: 35/35 (this book may have problems with the length of chapters and the characters, but the plot is definitely not one of
them! I love the uniqueness of the plot, it's quite uncommon in Wattpad)
Grammar: 19/20( there were no major
problem here, though my suggestion
would be to edit the minor mistakes with the puntuation by proofreading. Also, I'd suggest the author to elongated the chapters to atleast a 1000 words and slow down the pace a bit. If these are looked into and corrected, this book is sure to win many hearts)
Total: 93/100

8) Winner of Vampire/Werewolf genre, The Treasure Trove Awards

Review: From the point of view of a reader the story is very much interesting, Full of suspense, amazing. The characters should be described briefly in a separate chapter,so that the story will become more interesting. The cover of the story also requires a bit changes.
Otherwise, the story is perfect.

9) Winner of 3rd Place in Teen Fiction Genre, The Scarlet Awards 2020
10) Runner up in Teen Fiction Genre, The Bookie Awards 
Review: Title: 9/10
Cover: 8/10
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Writing style: 9/10
Overall Enjoyment: 18/20
First off, interesting title! I loved the
fantasy sound of it! Honestly, your blurb is one of the best blurbs I've ever read, so keep up the good work. The really special plot definitely drew me in. Overall, absolutely loved this book!

11) Winner of 3rd place in Snowdust  Awards Horror/Paranormal Genre
Review: Overall impression of book 10/10
Total points: 93/100
Review: the characters are really
interesting. The prolouge was very good. Verina has a real blast in it she goes through so many different things. It's awesome and very interesting seeing that.

12) Winner of 1st place, Vampire/Werewolf genre, the Eternity Awards
Review: It was quite a unique book, the kind that just hooks you in! I believe it would be very pleasurable to read to the end!

13) Winner of 3rd Place in Vampire/Werewolf genre, The Fall Stellar awards
Review:
Title: Montverde Academy
Author: pretty_poison_
Title: 8/10
Cover: 5/5
Blurb: 5/5
Plot: 23/25
Character Development: 20/20
Grammar vocabulary: 25/25
Interesting?: 5/5
Original?: 4/5
TOTAL SCORE: 95
Honest Feedback: I love the way you
describe the paragraph of you story. It's a nice description. This story is perfect. The/author does not need a critique because she is well made. The narrative has a nice blurb, setting, book cover, writing style, narration, description, characterization, and plot. This story is curiosity is eating me up. I also have a lot of questions about this story. Like, what is the connection of the protagonist (Ver) to the vampire
hunters and Monteverde University? I
hope the author lengthens the writing of the chapters to speed up the flow of the story. And that's it, good luck!

14) Winner of Ist Place in Vampire/Werewolf Genre, The Magical Awards
Review:
Discription- 8/10
Storyline- 8.5/10
Described - 8/10
Book Title- 5/5
Book Cover- 5/5
Opening & Ending- 8/10
Emotions- 8/10
Plot- 19/20
Overall-19/20
Total- 95.5/100
Review- I like the idea of her book how she balanced things. I like the title and cover. Chapters are interesting as I
kept reading but they are little short I mean she should write a little more but in anyway the story is interesting if you will dig in you can't leave type of
the story.

15) Winner of 3rd Place in Vampire Genre, The Golden Writer Award
Review: 3rd place goes to
pretty_poison
Cover + Title = 10/10
The title and cover both were very intriguing.
Blurb: 05/05
Yes it was the right length The blurb was also very clear
Plot development: 08/10
The plot was very interesting
Character development: 05/05 Yes
Grammar and punctuation: 05/05
Overall enjoyment: 15/15
I would personally reread this book 5
times. It was beautifully done and no
errors made.
Total score: 48/50

16) Winner of 3rd Place in Vampire Genre, The Grande Awards
Review: Your book leaves an air of mystery that is highly appreciated. I really love your cover and I appreciate the fact that your descriptions of the places are very vivid and that helped me to picture scenes a lot better.


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Highest Ranks:
#1 schoolstory
#14 royals

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