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PARTICIPANT :: vykiknighthadley
JUDGE :: My7kings_13

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DAUGHTER OF ARNOR
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Title:- 2/4 The title was story centric and unique but it has to be attractive too because it's one of those things which a reader notices first

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Title:- 2/4
The title was story centric and unique but it has to be attractive too because it's one of those things which a reader notices first .

Cover:- 2/4
The cover was well edited . I liked the main theme used in it . The font was a little fancy but good . The only problem with the cover is the girl over it . She has to be edited a little

Blurb:- 2/ 5
The blurb was well defined and detailed but it's being too detailed became a problem. Due to overly written it has become kind of boring usually readers skip reading it if it's not enjoyable. Adding some dialogues of characters can help to make it better . It can help readers to know about the voices of characters

Writing style:- 9/ 10
The whole book was written just like a novel . It's just perfect

Character development:- 4/ 5
Well it was good all the characters seemed pretty realistic and took a natural amount of time to develop.

Grammar:- 7/10
The grammar was pretty good . I didn't find any grammatical mistake it was well edited . there was use of simple as well as complex words but try to lessen the use of much complex words

Vocabulary:- 9/10
It was good and strong .

Plotting:- 11/12
The plot was really unique and intriguing to read . Everything was stated well to avoid the confusion. It was really a new experience to read history

Emotions:- 5/10
You have to improve here a bit . The emotions were displayed but not well . You should focus on showing the real emotion and feelings of characters for better understanding

Creativity:- 9/10
As i said earlier it was a totally new experience. The whole book was based on past events with strong clarification. I never thought that anybody would be writing a book on history

Worth reading:- 5/10
It was good but just some silly things have made it a little bit boring. But overall it was good

Overall impression:- 6/10
Just try improving the things stated above , rest is perfect.

Total:- 71/100

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