pennamed

Hi! Please read my first story "Hidden Wings." It's just the prologue though.
          serious comment please!!!! :)
          i don't mind negatives.. just be honest. but of course i also like positives! :)
          thanks.
          
          fan or vote if you like. :D

adeacia

Hey. I know this is a lot to ask but could you take a peek at my stories - Predestined(10 chapters in total) and arms of refuge(Only got one chapter up at the moment and is a work in progress). Would greatly appreciate it. Any comments, votes would be appreciated also. I'll return the favor ofc if you just comment on mine I'll know you read it etc. Lemme know what you'd prefer me to read in return.
          
          Thanks in advance. 
          Gina. 

SilverLove

Hey there! I was wondering if you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s three that I need some criticism on: 
          
          "A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!" romance/humor 
          Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell. 
          
          "Life Inside White walls" supernatural / romance 
          At the tender age of five, she claims to see a man who she called her guardian angel. Now Felicia, sixteen and broken, is trapped in a highly secured mental hospital. What will happen when the angel turns out to be real? And what if this angel wasn’t truly what it seemed? 
          
          "Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural 
          Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two? 
          
          It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :) 
          
          Thank you 
          -Silverlove