ZombieSuperhero

@SunsetSky 
          	
          	Thanks! ♥

skinandbonesx

i see your point. I'm the same way. Even stories I like on wattpad I have trouble reading past the first few chapters because i'm just easily distracted. There is just something so different about reading on a screen, and reading from the pages of a book.  
          
          I always value people's opinions when they leave real, thorough comments. I get so few decent comments from real readers, I guess It's a bit of a disappointment when those readers don't like it xD 
          
          but I'll stop being hard on myself and take your compliments without more negativity haha. Thanks again :)

ZombieSuperhero

@skinandbonesx 
          
          Ahh it's nothing personal. I have a hard time getting into ANY story/book that isn't made of paper and in my hands. And then I'm picky on top of that.
          
          Everyone has different tastes and I'm sure a lot of people will love what you did.  As I said though; you have obvious talent. Don't give up in the least.

skinandbonesx

blah :(
          
          Thanks for the comment. I'm glad for your honesty. Makes me frustrated though. You're kind of the type of reader I want for my work, since it's obvious you want something more serious and that's what I'm trying to offer. The fact that you think the second chapter comes off as teen fiction is like a stab to my heart. Teen fiction makes me want to die a little inside....
          
          I'm currently working with my 'editor' on the second chapter, because I DO want to cut it down. I know she comes off whining and that's not the message i'm trying to get across. I have trouble chipping away at stuff myself though, so i often need a second pair of eyes to tell me what is necessary and what isn't
          
          thanks for your opinion anyway though. It will at least help me in the future, and your comment was definitely not fake which is greatly appreciated. I was hoping to catch you with it but it seems I turned you away instead : <<<