Second Account: @LoveTap14

I'm an eighteen year old girl that loves reading and writing. I've been busy lately with school and stuff, but since I graduated this year, I have some time for myself, and I'm planning on finishing all stories that I've started on here.

Please bear with my updates. I don't have a schedule, but I'll try to update at least once every seven days. 

Thanks much! 

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  • Location:
    A state of cheese, cows, and more cheese.
  • Joined:
    4 years ago

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4 Published Works

Featured work.

I Spun the Bottle

Social data: 635K reads. 10.4K votes. 1.3K comments.

Description: "My heart skidded to a sudden halt as soon as it landed on him. He was the only person I didn’t want the bottle to land on. It seemed like everyone in the entire party turned their attention to both of us. I bit my lip in utter frustration." Caro...

Other Works by Sweetdreams31.
Mickey Who?

Mickey Who?

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What if you had the power to control hundreds of people’s love life just by simply saying anything? An...

Mickey Who? [OLD VERSION]

Mickey Who? [OLD VERSION]

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[OLD VERSION.] PLEASE be aware that these eight chapters are not up to date. However, I did not want to...

Hot Headed

Hot Headed

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[Previously known as: I'm a Fighter and He's the Hottie] Madison Storms has a hot head and a short tempe...

It's never boring! 

You're adding character developments. And I like that a lot-- makes it seem more realistic. :) Anyway, it's obvious who the prince is, unless you're setting up a trap for us! :P 

And I totally understand the groan she gave when she realized there were questions on the back of the paper. I’ve had that many times lol.

Anyway, can’t wait for your next update! I’m really looking forward to it. :D
Sweetdreams31 commented on Birdy

@imploding-hearts you're welcome! :) 
Ahh, well I see where you're coming from for the weight point of view now. :) Thanks for explaining that!

Nice choice for the title then. Makes a lot of sense for the word to describe Eliza. :) And thanks much for replying to my comment. :)
Sweetdreams31 commented on Birdy


I love the emotion and thought put into each sentence that Eliza thinks. It's so focused on one thing. Looking perfect. Being beautiful.

I can't ever say I've shared the same mindset, but I think you've nailed what a person in her condition thinks about things. The doctor repeats multiple times that "she looks dead" or that "she's dying" and yet it's like it passing through one ear and out the other. 

The flow of the story is quite neat. By the time I got to the last line...I was like :( I wanted it to go on.

If I could say anything about revision, I'd say I'd like to know her weight. But that's just me. OR, maybe that's just you being a great writer so that I want to know her weight. :P I'm gonna go with the second option, haha. 

Kinda sad though. I mean she doesn't choose a road that's better for her. So confused. So wanting only one thing. :( Sad knowing people like her exist in our world, and no one can do anything about it. 

But, great word choice. Nice flow. Good balance of description and action. It's very well rounded. And I enjoyed reading this in a bitter-sweet kind of way.

Quick question though-- mind explaining the choice of "Birdy" as your title? :)