LolaMaeStyles

could u check out my b Veronica?

@xoxoneil thanks a lot! I'll keep in mind what you said while writing:) xoxo

hey there! yeah i don't typically read other fics unless i'm extremely invested in them because i don't like to stray away from mine and with writing my own i don't have a lot of time, but seeing as yours just started i did read what you have so far! theres a couple grammatical things that could be fixed but maybe its just cause i'm american hahaha. it's hard to tell so early on, i think myself mine started out kind of cliche and got better with progression, so just keep going and work hard! also if you want it to be as realistic as possible, be detailed and don't rush, you don't want your story to be like everybody else's. good luck and thank you for caring about what i'd have to say, that in itself is a huge compliment! xoxo

@xoxoneil thanks to you for writing such an amazing story! I really love it so far! it would mean a lot to be if you would read my fanfic, if you've got time! it's my first fanfiction and I'd love to hear what you think about it:)xo

hey thanks so much for reading small world! i am so happy to see you voting for some chapters! if you would comment, i'd love to hear what you think! thanks again it means a lot :) xo