Psych slumber party tonight at 12:00-6:00 don't bother me!
@Angel_Eyes24 ... Well, I don't mind feedback. People can have their opinions of course. First of all, I don't mind people not liking my first chapter, but majority of people do, and all of my readers do. That's okay, I don't mind that you dislike it, but now that discussion is over. If you don't want to have this conversation then fine. Your confusion can be put to a stop.