@ProjectReadersReact is a project here on wattpad that is really awesome. I would like to invite you to check them out I believe you would find this site encouraging. There is a book on site that explains things better than I ever could.
thank you for your support in my book !! i was dealing with some issues the day you commented your advice and so i wasnt able to thank you properly. thank you , i truly appreciated your advice.
Thanks for adding GREEN DOOR to your reading list.
Do please bear in mind that it is an early draft and I want to develop it into a full novel.
However, I do have two complete SF novels, edited and currently being submitted to agents. You might find one of these a better story of mine to start with, but, of course, up to you.
THE VISITOR - A first contact novel with a unique twist, featuring a dynamic woman astronaut: https://www.wattpad.com/403741958-the-visitor-introduction
MINDSLIP - A bizarre catastrophe novel which explores the world's ability to deal with something which was totally unexpected: https://www.wattpad.com/417242952-mindslip-introduction
Hope you enjoy GREEN DOOR too. It was a joy to write it.
Tony