Whoa, this is creepy, but in a good way xD I love how you've described the girl, I got shivers down my spine. Defiantly going to keep reading this.
Well that was interesting, I like how you introduced the little girl I didnt expect this to be a fantasy.. *voted*
Unique and original. I like the storyline. Well written and beautifully portrayed. I actually think this is really good ;)
''The dead audience...'' Creepy :) Why always children are the bad ones in horrors? Their creepy smile...Pretty orginal idea, like it. :)
Quite ravishing though I wished for more and you have a very interesting story line you got here. Keep on writing it! :)
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| Name | Fatima <3 |
| Location | Planet Nightmare, Jokes just in England |
| Birthday | Mar 16 |
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