@FallingSaturdays Really? I love that story too. It was a whole internal conflict. The way it started was like, omg what had just happen type of thing!
Wow. It reminds me of the Tattle Tale Hearts, by Egar Allen Poe. It creepy, but the way you wrote it still amazes me.
I like it! Good amount of detail, you didn't go overboard with dialogue or anything, at least not yet :P
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