I love this story! The only comment I could make is to watch tense changes (you sometimes jump from past to present) but other than that, perfect!
charlie only knows about werewolfs not vampires. not trying to be rude just saying if u didnt know
I'm srry I just started reading but 1 thing I noticed the vampires don't sleep and once nessie hits puberty she is full vamp
Hey just so you know, charlie never found out about the vampires. He only knew about jake. At least of my knowledge
PLEASE PLEASE ADD MORE!! This is my fav book of all times!! Please add more! I love it:)
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