I thought this story was very interesting. I wish it was longer cause if it was, it would make an AMAZING story:) Keep up the good work! Voted:)
Only read the prologue and already i have voted and added to my reading list, love your work :)
So sad :(
I'm just gunna say this one thing, in the prologue I think you might have put 'Emma' too much maybe try 'she'? But AWESOME!
But so sad
also, what's a forest walk away? might have to be more specific. forests can be huge or tiny
I agree with the comment below.
But at the same time, oh god that must be awful and kind of exciting seeing your ghost sister!
this chapter was so good. Ur good at dialogues, but maybe be a bit more descriptive of their surroundings?
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