Midnight Disaster ~FINALIST Watty Awards 2012~
Sidenote: This is not an ET story people will die!!
Cameron and Maya are great friends (sometimes borderline dating) looking for something to keep them entertained in their annual summer adventure. Little do they know it comes to them in the form of an abandoned alien. At first their main concern is keeping him hidden from the public and their friends until they realize that something is really wrong with the alien. On the night of the full moon they discover their true problem. Their hometown is in grave danger.
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Your prologue is pretty intense I think it sets it up well for the rest of the book :)
I love the prologue. It is very well-written and descriptive. It peaks my interest. Great job! :)
Hook, line, and sinker, I'm in! Although you should use more interesting words as opposed to 'were' and 'was' and 'went'.
I like the suspense here.Pretty good. it leaves the reader to wonder what would happen next.
This is the perfect beginning. I really enjoyed reading it, it pulled me in from the start <3
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KaylaKrantz
| Name | Kayla Krantz |
| Location | Roseville Mi |
| Birthday | May 24 |
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