Your spacing is weird to me. O.o Good details, why did you space so much in the beginning? Overall, I liked it.
it was great! it has all the things to expect in a horror movie so far keep up the good work:) don't forget to smile:)
Powerful storytelling from your descriptions. I almost couldn't finish reading because it just broke my heart :( But wow, it was amazing.
Lol my comments down there, so once again, great. :3 vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
Voted! I love how detailed this is. The beginning is really good and got me hooked. I love your writing style! xx :)
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