The Lores of Lyra - Rising Star [Book I]

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Maja Diana By MajaDiana Completed
[Watty Winner 2012, Fantasy / Teen Fic / Adventure / Romance] 
    
    Stars. For millennia, humans have stared up at the sky watching them light up the night. Unknown to most, they've been watching back, protecting us and keeping us safe from dangers. However, in the land of Astron, two girls are struggling to keep themselves alive.
    
    Miriam has a dark secret, living a secluded life with all the benefits that wealth provides. While Annabell is a poor orphan with a natural born gift of getting into trouble.
    
    With the help of two handsome lads, they have to uncover the truth about the prophecy that the Elders have worked so hard to hide. They need to find each other before it’s too late. Change is coming, and Darkness is growing.
    
    In a race against time, they have to find the Rising Star before it's too late.
    
    Solem, help us all.
    
    [This is the first book in 'The Lores of Lyra]
Just a guess, but is she connected to someone or something so that whatever happens to them happens to her?
After having this in the reading list for months I decided to read it
That was a really good first chapter and very detailed I could picture everything happening and I think it is very creative and must have taken a while to create the fact that Miriam is attacked by something you can't see
am I the only one who thought of the catholic chant kyrie eleison, christe eleison for lord have mercy, Christ have mercy lol
My heart broke when the attack started...it's still breaking at the thought of Miriam having endured all that for so long...
I've never said this about anything else I've read on wattpad but this story is so intriguing. It makes you want to find out what happens next. Like all the best stories do. I'd be very surprised if an agent or publisher didn't take this. And that's after only one chapter. Very well done.