Book Review 08

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Work name: Alpha Kane
Author: Amina Adamou
Genre: Vampire/ Werewolf
Reads: 1M
Parts: 40
Status: Completed

When I was reading the prologue, I can already say that this is an interesting story. No doubt that a lot of your readers from Wattpad even downloaded another app just to continue reading Alpha Kane. But I wouldn't lie, I've seen a lot of novels like this. I've already read a lot of stories that start like this however, what matters here is how you'll deliver the plot, how you'll make it more interesting in every chapter you write, and how you'll make the readers stay. You made me read more chapters, so, be proud because that means that you've written a really good story.

I also like your use of words. I've learnt in one of our subjects in school, that in writing you should know who your target readers are. If your target readers are Chinese then use Mandarin, if they are Filipinos then use Filipino. And if you don't have a specific target reader in one nation, you just want everyone to discover AK then, use the universal language. Although, you should just use the basic words in english if you want to attract everyone. Because in Asian countries for example, they know how to speak english but take note that it's not their mother tongue. So, you did a very great job with your use of words.

Moving to the book cover. It is simple. I like how the person in the picture looks in me, directly in my eyes, as if telling me "check me out!", "read me now!" lol. However, I feel like you can still improve it. I'm not a good graphic artist but I feel like your cover is lacking something, I just don't know what it is.

I really recommend this book. It's interesting and mysterious. No wonder, 82.9% of readers voted it as #1 Paranormal story. So, without further ado, go check Alpha Kane now in the app called AnyStories or just go click this link https://anystories.onelink.me/zUil/up8

A note to Amina, know that you and your story are making a lot of people happy. We all know the situation right now, everyone's having a difficult time, they needed something that will make them forget this whole pandemic thing for a while. And your stories are really helping them, even me, so, thank you. Just continue doing your passion. You're an excellent writer. You deserve all the readers love and support. I'm wishing for the success of Alpha Kane and Alpha Ember.

Signing off,
Angel

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 15, 2020 ⏰

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