My Immortal (with notes)

My Immortal C2

AN: Fangz 2 bloodytearz666 4 helpin me wif da chapta! BTW preps stop flaming ma story ok!

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The next day I woke up in my bedroom. It was snowing and raining again. 

How exciting! More bad weather!

I opened the door of my coffin and drank some blood from a bottle I had.

Sounds nutritious.

My coffin was black ebony and inside it was hot pink velvet with black lace on the ends. 

A designer coffin?

I got out of my coffin and took of my giant MCR t-shirt which I used for pajamas. Instead, I put on a black leather dress, a pentagram necklace, combat boots and black fishnets on. I put on four pairs of earrings in my pierced ears, and put my hair in a kind of messy bun.

Sounds a bit overkill if you ask me. 

My friend, (AN: Raven dis is u!) woke up then and grinned at me. She flipped her long waist-length raven black hair with pink streaks and opened her forest-green eyes. She put on her Marilyn Manson t-shirt with a black mini, fishnets and pointy high-heeled boots. We put on our makeup (black lipstick white foundation and black eyeliner.)

Again, a bit overkill.

"OMFG, I saw you talking to Draco Malfoy yesterday!" she said excitedly.

"Yeah? So?" I said, blushing.

"Do you like Draco?" she asked as we went out of the common room and into the Great Hall.

"No I so fucking don't!" I shouted.

"Yeah right!" she exclaimed. Just then, Draco walked up to me.

I think he might have heard you, somehow.

"Hi." he said.

"Hi." I replied flirtily.

"Guess what." he said.

"What?" I asked.

Again with the exciting conversations.

"Well, are having a concert in ." he told me.

Pardon?

"Oh. My. Fucking. God!" I screamed. 

She needs to calm down.

I love GC. They are my favorite band, besides MCR. "Well.... do you want to go with me?" he asked.

I gasped.