Seventeen Threads (english version)

T.1 Seventeen as authors

Scoups

-he's a self proclaimed macho man

-so obviously, he isn't into romance and comedy

-he prefers to write action and thriller

-the only problem is...

-when he writes a story...

-10% of it is the main plot

-90% pure action

-as in PURE ACTION

SCOUPS WRITING A STORY: "Chapter 1: title: who is my father?

Dino went inside the garage. The evil guys surrounded him as he shouted, "Who is my father?!" But no one answered him. They run into him with iron bats on their hands. Dino kicked and punched. He jumped, and turned around for upper cut. He pulled a guy's hair and threw him somewhere. "Ahhh" the guy groaned. Another one approached him and he choked his neck. He punched and punched and punched! He is getting tired. "Hoo haa hoo haa" he pants. But there are still more enemies left. So he punched again, jumping in range.   - to be continued"

SCOUPS WRITING A STORY AGAIN: "CHAPTER 2: EVERYTHING WILL BE ALRIGHT AS SOON AS I punch

After he punched them, he kicks their stomach with his knee. Then he bend down and strikes their eyes with his index and middle finger. He stood up again and punch...

-see that? -_-
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Jeonghan

-he writes good stories

-but he rarely updates

-when he does, he always check how many peeps have liked his post

-if his story got few likes, he deleted it right away, sulking " No one is supporting me"

-he is a little moody whether he'll continue to write or not

-but what noticeable on his story is the way he started every chapter

JEONGHAN WRITING A STORY: Chapter 1: title: A Typical morning

"I woke up, a little bit tipsy..."

Chapter 2- Tomorrow is another day

"When I opened my eyes, it's morning."

Chapter 3- After the sunrise

"Joshua woke up in his soft bed. He hugs his pillows and groaned cause he doesn't want to go up..."

Chapter 4- Sleep

"He lays on his bed and sighed, " Why do I love Ms. Yoon so bad?" "

A READER COMMENTED ON HIS STORY- "Hello Author. Why do you always start your story in bed?"

-Jeonghan just seen the comment and sleep

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Joshua

-his narrating skill is no joke

-well he is really fluent in native English

-he explained things well using great words

-but...

-his story is weird

-the narrating is good but the plot is ... How should I say it?

-well let's just take a look at his story

JOSHUA IS WRITING A STORY: title: One autumn

" The autumn has dressed herself for the coming season, donning her most vibrant hues. She has swept into our streets and woodlands with a humble boldness that invites the eye to see more than they otherwise might. The autumn takes her pirouette, her sweet turn on the stage all around, and we are so blessed to be given such beauty. I walked around to witness it, to feel the crispy cold. Then a bicycle passed by. I got hit and ... DIED."