BOOK SUGGESTIONS/ CRITICIZE FOR FREE! II

If only lies that are hidden

Hey non-human_group,

First off, sorry for the RIDICULOUS wait (I got this email... May 23rd 2013 oops). I'm going to review your story and give you a generalized idea on what to work on. I really like all the poems!

It's pretty good, I'd just watch out that you should probably capitalize every first letter and the beginning of the phrases, and watch out for punctuation!

Example:

dont --> don't

Example:

not a word was said

but deep down [..]

becomes...

Not a word was said

But deep down [...]

Revise every poem carefully! Check for any little mistakes, fix them, and save it!

~Julian

Date: 16 December 2015