Hey, it's the author here! So I've been a bit troubled with this story and haven't been too satisfied with the chapters. I was hoping you'd all like to give me some feedback perhaps? What do you think? Do you like York? Serena? Alexia? Connor? How about Michael or Jack, who was only mentioned throwing a fit and passing out on the floor?
The next few chapters will continue showing York's relationship with each of his roommates, and the story will continue to advance from there.
Please be sure to tell me if I'm going too slow or if you get bored, I'll keep everyone's comments in mind as I write.
-Many Thanks, Scarfox15
ESTÁS LEYENDO
To Love And To Lose
AventuraMy name is York, and this is my story. The story of the First Arrival, and my life before I was sentenced to life on The Island, or death.
