Moving On - Ace Primo Short Story [ Starring You ]

Chapter O1

Listen to this while you read this story - ( on the side of the panel ] 

.:: YN Pov ::. Hey my name is ( Your Name ) and I'm 17 years old at Middleton High so I have these three best friends that I could ever have in my life Mercedes, Monae, &'d Maui and don't ask me why they all have M's on there first names but getting right to the point I had a boyfriend name Ace Primo he means the world to me and I love him so much that I thought was  the one for me in my life and I have met him since I was in the 8th grade as him then after a few months we started to hit it off so we have been together for 3 in half years but that all had faded away cause we are no long together anymore and when I see him in the hallway it makes me cry with his new chick on his arm hurt me badly *looks down with a tear falling from her eyes*  .  .  . End of pov 

|| ** F L A S H B A C K ** ||

.:: YN Pov ::. I was at home getting ready to go out with my boyfriend cause he was taking to the park to have some fun time together so i went to the bathroom and after I was done I went back to my room then got dresses something very simple then I was almost done I ear the doorbell rang so I went downstairs with my keys and phone in my hand End of pov 

||**YN**|| http://www.polyvore.com/yn_outfit/set?id=50088066 ( write the link ] 

::Ace Primo:: hey babe are you ready 

::YN:: yes I am 

::Ace Primo:: now come here and give me a kiss 

::YN:: ( kisses him ) 

::Ace Primo:: ( kisses back ) 

.:: 10 minutes later ::. 

::Ace Primo:: alright come on babe 

::YN:: alright 

.:: YN Pov ::. when I see my baby Ace Primo smile at me it feels like I'm the only girl in the world that he wakes up to see and when ever we are together we would listen to are songs that we would listen together I love him so much End of pov 

.:: At the Park ::.

::Ace Primo:: I'll race you to the swings 

::YN:: not if I get there first ( runs ) 

::Ace Primo:: you little sneak ( runs up to her ) 

::YN:: ( looks back to Ace catching up to her ) 

::Ace Primo:: gotcha 

::YN:: ( lols ) 

::PS:: I was hearing this song so I had to make a story out of it and wrote it on my computer and I was finish over an hour so I hope you like it cause I work very hard  :)

What do you guys think ?