Lived In Reality, Moved to Naruto [UNEDITED AND UNCUT]

Chapter 17 Mizuki's Plan ~ Finally, We Begin The Actual Story? (Edited)

EDIT! There are new parts added to this chapter! DO NOT MIND THEM!!

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Safireanddiamonds : Okii!I opened this url at like, 2 pm, nd it's now 5:30... LOL I was too busy looking at ShikaIno pics on dA, can you blame me? ANyways, I wanted to thank you all for your support, and that I really apreatiate it.

And sadly, It is confirmed that my android is dead, it can't be fixed. And that makes me sad.

On a brighter note: I was going through Makko/Melissa's character design, (Not apperance) and I was looking for somethings on the web that would help, and I found a thing on dA, and it was really cool. SO yeah, I perfected Makko's strengths and flaws, so she is more relatable, I woudn't want to create a story where the main OC is OP, cuz then you can't relate to them very well. ANyways, during this tutorial, the author gave an example using her own OC, and I thought it was really cool so I looked into it more.

Her name is Hani Hachi, and her debut story is called : Bee-uty and the Beast : And for you people who didn't instantly get who the "Beast" is, It's a GaixOC Fic(You know, he's the "Green Beast" of Konoha ;) ), and it's freaking AMAZING.

I'll leave the link in a comment, and believe me when I say, it is WORTH THE READ. Before I read this, I thought that Gai was weird, and creepy, but after reading it, you get a better view on how the Maight Gai thinks. Seriously. WORTH THE READ.

Now, back on topic, there won't be a chapter next week as I am going back up north, but I will still be on her sometimes to reply to your comment and answer your questions!

So, without further adieu, please -

Gai: READ, FAN, VOTE, AND COMMENT! YOSH!! *Nice Guy Pose*

Hani : *Takes of shoes and starts beating Gai* DONT *hit* INTERUPT *hit* A *hit* WOMAN *hit* WHEN *hit* SHE *hit* IS *hit* SPEAKING!!! *hit*

Lee: *cringe*

Neji : As he always said...

Tenten: Hell hath no wrath like a woman Scorned.

READ

FAN

VOTE

COMMENT

Here We Gooo~~~~ 

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/Note 11: Wasn't Built To Lose 

Not much has happened since my last note, except for learning an awesome jutsu.  Well, for me anyways. To Naruto it was probably the most important piece of information he'll ever hear. That's right. We just fought Mizuki. Details? Why would I give you those? Pfft, no. I just got back to you my sweet android~ Sorry about Naruto's stunt earlier; he Just didn't know any better. Well, my ribs are killing me and I have to go find someone, k laterz!! /

Makko's POV

I and Naruto reached the Barn with no difficulty. When we got there, we waited for 10 minutes before Naruto decided he was bored and opened the scroll. We looked at the writing speaking of different Jutsus that do different things, and they all looked so interesting. Of course Naruto started to look at the Kage Bunshin, and I of course, already know it. Thanks to my book of amazing Jutsus. But I did see one that I thought was very interesting.