The Survivors- Booklover_sara
Although the idea is quiet interesting, you need to work on grammar and past/present tense. It switches in the story and can be very distracting from the actual story. To be fair, I think beneath a few errors such as sentence structure, I can see your description has the potential to be captivating, however, the story needs to be read over and edited.
You might need to try and slow the story down and make it a bit slower paced as already into the first chapter, so much has happened. However, it is a fan fiction so it's most likely aimed at fans of the original novels of Hunger games so they would know what's going on, but at the same time, by starting your story and explaining what's happening in the first chapter makes it your own.
Overall, the idea of the story, like I said is interesting but unfortunately it needs a lot of editing.
In terms of the cover, it's very beautiful and not cluttered with so much stuff. The title and text is perfect against the background, and stands out amongst other covers.
STORY: 5
COVER: 7
