Kizuna, Bond between Us by sayuriMa
If I remember it correctly this was the 1st story na nabasa ko here on Wattpad, kaya dapat lang na ito rin ang bigyan ko ng 1st review ko.
Title: nag-search ako so I found out that kizuna is a Japanese word meaning "bond". Therefore, shown on secondary title ‘Bond between Us’. Siguro, may lahing Japanese sya or like me mahilig lang sa anime at manga. ^_^
1st person POV, maganda ang pagna-narrate, may emotions and feeling. Pero may time na parang hindi angkop katulad ng nina-narrate ni Mao kung anong ginagawa ni Yano eh wala sya sa eksena (yung tipong nasa kwarto si Mao sa 2nd flr at nasa baba si Yano kausap ang parents ni Mao)
Gusto ko ang personality ni Mao, matapang pero hindi OA.
It was heartwarming, may time talaga na na-iyak ako.
I liked the twist, it was kind of unexpected.
Maraming characters na may kwento na kasama na dito, sa tingin ko dapat ginawan nalang ng nakabukod, I guess they deserve their own story.
May ideas na medyo may ii-improve pa, like: sweet oranges (favorite fruit ni Yukie, reason kung paano sya naniwalang ni Mao ay si Ericka) it could have been a little more unique kasi marami namang tao ang may paborito sa orange.
Over all, I enjoyed reading this. Kung ire-rate ko ng 1-10, i’ll give it an 8.
Sorry kung lame/kulang, matagal ko na kasing nabasa. Ni-scan ko lang sya ulet for this review kaya baka dagdagan ko pa ito pag may naalala akong pwedeng idagdag ditto.
PS: My part2 yata ito pero hindi ko pa nababasa kasi may kinaki-adikan akong story as of now.
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