Okay so your prologue thing was very interesting, it made me want to read more. I honestly only read up to chapter one page 2. I think you rushed it a little with the idea and I thought it was weird how she just wanted to go with him to London out of no where.
But I have to say that your writing skills are fantastic. The way you used detail, like it wasn't a lot of detail but it was the right amount. I applaud you on how you write.
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I love youuuu xoxo.
