20. Stole My Heart

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by arizonafthes

Dedicated to TiaMolloy

by arizonafthes

Title: Stole My Heart

Author: TiaMolloy

Summary: Katy is a senior in High School. She lives in a huge mansion with no-one else all her friends live in their own one too. In the run up to prom her and her friends meet one direction and all they start datin. Go to prom and some even get married and have kids and others things don't turn out the way they plan

Parts& Pages: 13 parts and 8 pages

Comments: I'm sorry, I just cant read it. Um, to start with, it has WAY too many characters. Not every member of One Direction has to be in a relationship with the exact amount of friends she has. It's also confusing, having so many characters, having to remember who's who and who hates who and what everything stands for. I'm sorry, its just not my type of story. But, there's always room to improve.

Stars? ☆☆/☆☆☆☆☆