An untouchable criminal

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Laura and klin looked at me in a total surprise but I continued "before saying anything you can forget that man completely cause I'm not being in contact with him"

"Why .. who is that guy anyway?"
Laura said

"He is.." I paused as I felt it was dangerous to talk about him in front of people "come to me at 5:35 pm .. I'll tell you then" I continued ..

"Why not now?" Laura asked

"I can't .. ok see you later guys " I replied then took my backpack and left .. once I arrived home I opened my laptop and searched for that guy to see if he really exist .. I hoped he isn't alive but he was .. Jake Ronne .. A professional criminal that more than 5000 bounty hunter are looking for him to hunt him down for a 3 billion price .. he could handle 100 assasin all alone and none if them could even put a scratch on him .. he know more than 100 type of martial arts and he is one of the best Gunslingers in America .. he is 100% unstoppable .. no one could defeat him till now ... I was a fool to think a guy like that would die a voilent death and above all he carries the family's bloodline and he has the Ronne's tattoo so I believe that he is a Ronne after all .. but I still can't get in contact with him ..

The door bell rang interrupting my thoughts .. I went to open the door it was laura and klin .. "come in ... follow me " I said

They went inside . I lead the way to my laptop

"So tell us about that man" laura said

I pointed to my laptop without saying anything .. klin picked it up and put it on the table

"What's this?" Klin asked

"A full info about the man you saw this morning " I answered

Klin checked it then said "Jake Ronne .. wanted for 3 billion dollars dead or alive .. one of the most professional criminal in America and a high skilled assassin .. 4908 people assasinated , 5098 mission success , never failed a mission and his assassination rank is a full elite assasin .."

"Kyle who is that . Your uncle or something" laura said

"Something like that . And I guess what you just heard is enough to know why I don't wanna contact him " I replied

"Are you afraid?" Laura asked quickly

"No I'm not but what would make me contact a professional criminal? " I answered

"Amm getting info about your family" she said

".. I just can't face him .." I replied

"Why?" She asked

"Cause that man tried to kill my father before .. I can't just go ask him for help" I answered

"So you're gonna give up your dream just like that? " she said

I stood in a total confusion thinking 'did I really forget my way or what I said about neber give up?' Then I looked at her .. her face looked disappointed. . I couldn't help it but to say"ok I'll go .. klin .. get me his location "

"Ok give me a moment" klin said

Laura smiled cheerfully then said "Great .. and I'm coming with you"

"Now that's something that won't happen .. I wouldn't put you in such danger" I replied quickly

"I'm not letting you go if I'm not going with you" she said

"Why do you wanna go with me that much"i asked but before she answer I pulled her to me and hugged her tightly then said in a gentle voice "don't worry I'll be back sooner than you think" then I kissed her .. "found it" klin said .. I checked it and found out that he is in our city .. not far at all as I feared
"O-ok but keep this with you" laura said and gaved me a small device ..
"This is a.."

"Shh . He doesn't know remember? " laura said

It was a hidden mike ... I put it on and hid it calmly .. then got back to klin .. I opened the door of a secret room right under mine .. and pulled a gun , a shoot gun and sniper .. I put them in a bag then .. he looked at me then said .. "why do you have all those weapons ?"

"Protection but I won't take them .. just the gun" I picked it up and hid it in my clothes .. and then I went off ..



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