Falling For The Internet Guy
by cold_lady19
Synopsis:
Four Words can actually change someone’s life forever.
And for Julie Ann Jones, these four words didn’t really come from a person. It came from a website’s motto.
Discover a World of Unlimited Stories.
Well, it’s not technically four but that’s not really my point. Julie Ann Jones is nothing out-of-the-ordinary. She’s a normal teenager who always stays up late and hangs online. She is an avid reader and writer. She eats a lot of Ruffles, and she has some friends. She’s neither a popular girl nor a nerdy. But her unextraordinary life had changed forever since she found this bright orange e-book community called Wattpad.
Not only she found a home to share her works and writings, but guess what?
She also found a home for her heart.
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Review
And that’s how I can summarize my most favorite book here in this e-book community. My Wattpad Love is a fun-filled, dramatic-but-still-humorous, love story between my most favorite Wattpad characters, Jules and Evan. That’s why as a fellow reader and writer in this e-book community, I thought that my first book review would come from this awesome novel by Arix, also known as cold_lady19.
I have divided this book review into ten parts, and give them rating based on these ten hearts. (omg that actually rhymes)
1. BOOK COVER: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡♡
They say that you should not judge a book by its cover. But in this review, I will include it. Personally, book covers catches my interest. If it’s good, I’d check the story out. In my opinion, if book covers are given effort by the author, it has my clconsider giving effort to it.
For MWL’s cover, I just love it. It’s filled with different colors and the texts are very visible. The picture used has a clear connection with the story and is very cute. The only thing I don’t see as great is that Arix didn’t put her name in the cover. For me, she needs to put it for recognition and rights for such a successful story. So in general, I give this part a 8 out of 10 hearts
2. CHARACTERS: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡
From the casting to the personalities and faces, I just love how Arix planned out her characters. First point is the casting. They fit perfectly to their roles and how she described their appearances to the story. I mean, Evan as Jeremy Kapone is perfect for the role. He’s so much better than the guy I imagined when I was still unaware of the casting. In addition, the way she introduced her characters in the story is portrayed very well. She used more actions and dialogues instead of using the narrator’s point of view in introducing each of her characters. So I give this part a 9 out of 10 hearts! Way to go!
3. TITLE: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Three words: Simple. Catchy. Cute. Personally, I don’t like titles which have excessive use of words. 3-5 words are just fine. MWL is a perfect example of a title that’s not exaggerated but still able to briefly convey the content of the story. That’s why this part received a 10.
4. STORYLINE / CONCEPT: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Whoa! A perfect 10 again! Yes, I give MWL a perfect 10 for the storyline and concept. It isn’t gonna be my favorite if this part isn’t a 10 more or less, right? I don’t know… I just find the whole thing so creative and genius from the start (honestly, even before I started reading it) Just imagine yourself as an avid reader and writer, just finding yourself stumbling upon this website like Wattpad and eventually finding the love of your life as well? It’s such an extraordinary idea that will surely catch readers’ attention (since we are in Wattpad) especially those who are keen to Romance and Teen Fiction and a bit of Humor. Some people
read to escape their dull and lifeless realities (I don’t know about you, but I do) and just imagine this whole thing happen to you.
Three words. Oh. My Gosh. (Hahahaha)
5. CATEGORIZATION / GENRE: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
10 hearts. Call me biased or whatever but I want MWL to win Watty Awards 2012: Most Popular okay? And it’s just perfect under the Teen Fiction (Romance and Humor, if I may add) categories! NEED I SAY MORE?!
6. GRAMMAR: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡♡♡
I gave this part 7 out of 10 because some chapters really need to be edited. There are a few grammar errors that I just can’t avoid to focus on. I understand that she gives an early notice that some chapters are unedited, it’s just I’m quite a perfectionist when it comes to writing (this actually takes up my time while
writing) so I hope she edits or let someone edit MWL soon!
7. FLOW OF EVENTS: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡♡
8 out of 10. It’s nearly perfection, the way she made and bridged the story. For me, actions really speak louder than words. That’s why I gave this part an 8 because she used more dialogues than narrations. But sometimes I do feel that some parts lack of some detail that can be done by narration and she missed
that part out.
8. EXCITEMENT LEVEL / ELEMENT OF SURPRISE: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡
It’s partly perfection simply because there isn’t a dull moment in each chapter. I never observed—in a reader’s point of view—any “filler chapters” so 9 hearts for this!
9. AUDIENCE IMPACT: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡
9 hearts for this as well because the reads, votes and comments all have an equal balance to each other—not just an equal balance but an equally high balance. There’s one heart missing though because I noticed that the audience of MWL is more of females rather than males. Very few males read MWL so I deducted one heart from the set.
10. OVERALL AWESOMENESS: ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♡
To sum up my whole review, I give My Wattpad Lovel 9 out of 10. She proves that this story is really worth reading! So I do hope you voted MWL in the Watty Awards 2012 because it deserves all the colorful fruits in the world! Jules and Evan’s love story is one of a kind, with all the drama, fun and humor, surprise,
romance and awesomeness rolled into one. My Wattpad Love is a worthwhile read!
Go check out My Wattpad Love at http://www.wattpad.com/story/1081752-my-
wattpad-love and also check out her other works at @cold_lady19✎
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This review is written by Allie (http://www.wattpad.com/user/earthtoeilla)
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