The Elf And the Rock(T.E.A.R)

Origin

Had to rewrite the first 3 chapters because I cringed to much when I read it again-
(*Rewrite*) started at 22/12/21
ended at 01/03/22
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Narrator' POV

"Lucia stop lazying around"

Lucia groaned while sitting on a chair next to the the front desk "Got it Boss" she says lazily and sarcasticly
A young brunette man who was sitting behind the desk said while shaking his head "I swear I have no idea how you got that guard job"

Lucia chuckles while stretching "hey that's mean Ausker~ " she said while pouting

Andy responded "You're so lazy you won't even care and also don't call me that" he looked at her with a 😑 kind of expression

Lucia finished stretching and stood up while speaking "True but can't you just relax there no one he-" she saif while turning her back from the front entrance of the bank

*DING*

Andy looked at the newcomer and greeted them in a welcoming tone of voice"Good afternoon sir how may i help you for today?"

???:The man smirked while his hand was in his coat"Oh you can help me" starts pulling something out of his coat
"By giving me the money in the bank" the man shot the roof signaling the two men outside

Scared/unexperienced Robber:"Y-YOU!" A small man in a black ski mask said stuttering. He pointed his gun towards Lucia "G-GET DOWN ON THE GROUND. AND TAKE OUT ALL YOUR W-WEAPONS" He shouted in a panicking tone

Lucia was sweating bullets (heh)"O-ok I'm sitting do-"She got caught off by a loud gun shot. She looked down to her chest that was already stained with blood. She dropped to the ground bleeding out from her wound

Big Robber:" BRO WTF WHY DID YOU SHOOT HER SHE WAS ABOUT TO SIT DOWN" he yelled to the small man

Scared/unexperienced robber:His hands were shaking. Inside the mask he was sweating and thinking [I just killed a person] he dropped the gun shaking "I-I thought she was gonna pull out a gun..."
Big robber:"YA BLIND DUMB FUCK DIDN'T YOU SEE SHE ONLY HAD A BATON" He pointed at her hip where the baton hanged on
Scared/unexperience robber: "I'M SORRY OK I PANICKED"
Experienced Robber:"WOULD YOU TWO SHUT THE FUCK UP HELP ME OVER HERE" He pointed at the bags of cash Andy took from the vault

Andy was sweating buckets and was trying hard not to scream in terror "H-Heres all the money" he said while bringing and dropping the bags of money on the counter. He then tried to push a button under the desk that can call the police

The big robber was about to take the bags but he saw Andy trying to push the button. He lunged his hand towards Andy's arm "OH no you don't ya coward" he snarled while twisting Andy's arms behind his back "Your coming with us" he says while pushing him out towards a van

The big robber pushed him into the back of their van and tied him up using rope

" OoOoO kinky"

CUT
🎬🎞️📽️. TAKE 2

Andy whimpered in pain "Ouch fuck that hurt" he says while winces

In the distance a police siren rang out signaling the robbers that they were on their way to arrest their asses.

ER(Experienced robber) :"SHIT SHIT SHIT THEY'RE ALREADY HERE" he then turned to the inexperienced Robber (IR) and yelled an order

"HURRY THE FUCK UP ALREADY IF IT WEREN'T FOR YOU WE'D ONLY BE CONVICTED OF ROBBERY BUT NOW IT'S MURDER AND ROBBERY"

IR:He started stuttering a reply"I-I'm sorry I pani-" but he was cut off by ER

"JUST SHUT THE FUCK UP AND DRIVE" he says running out of the building with a bag of money. He got into the van with the others and me in the back of the van.

The van went down the road breaking tons of speed limits and running a red light

A family was walking across the crosswalk not suspecting anything to happen today... Until they heard honking the looked down the road seeing a speeding truck coming towards them

Andy saw the family that they were about to hit"SHIT "he cursed out. He jumped over towards the steering wheel and used his legs to turn the van away from the family

All of the robbers screamed at the same time:"OH SHI-" And with

The van toppled over the family, who were ducking BTW hugging eachother thinking that they were gonna die and that they didn't have enough time to get out of the way. Anyways the van tumbled over the road killing the robbers inside besides Andy

Andy was outside besides the burning van, his head bleeding and a long pole that looks like a stop sign impaled in his chest, he coughed out blood hearing the police sirens

"To late-" he said before blacking out from the pain and blood loss

Suddenly he was in a bright and white room

???:"heya"

A voice rang out, Andy couldn't see anyone since he was blinded by the sudden light exposure into his eyes

His eyes suddenly cleared

Cringey I know

WELL THATS A WRAP
I hope you guys loved reading that rewrite
good-night,goodmorning or good afternoon
Hope you guys loved this
Cause I sure do
Cya in the next chapter

Also this was 883 words