Hello!
I am c_old22, and I'm looking for some feedback on the first chapter of a story.
I first came up with these characters in 2018, and wrote out a basic story. I rediscovered it in 2021, and decided to clean it up a bit.
Mostly, I'm trying to see if people are interested in these characters and in the story. If you read this firs chapter and like it, please let me know! I have much more written, but hopefully this helps motivate me to actually finish this WIP. :D
Thanks for reading!
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Bellona and Pax
RomanceThis is the first chapter of a multi-POV story I'm working on. I'm posting mostly to just get some feedback and see if this is a story people would be interested in reading! Empress Bellona Irata is the proud young ruler of the Iratem Empire. Along...
