1313LoveGirl1313

Hello peoples! Haven't been here in a hot minute, but I just finished watching Good omens season two and I'm looking for some good suggestions! I do like demon x angel x reader/oc but I can't seem to find any that were made this year! 

sidster20

Hi there, I have read your Forbidden Kingdom fanfic and it was cute, you should update it. I have a completed one you'll enjoy.

1313LoveGirl1313

@sidster20 wow, no one's posted on my page in 3 years lol, I wish I could update my stories but I just don't have the motivation anymore since I've been working to pay my bills
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Dfc1992

Posted another chapter of Your Guardian. Hope you like it.

1313LoveGirl1313

@Dfc1992 I hope it's good for you, you sound a little down, 
            *Brain smacks me* Duh!!
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Dfc1992

No But I’ll try to read it on my lunch today at work(need something to make the day better)
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1313LoveGirl1313

@Dfc1992 have you looked at my donnie book, Silent Love For A Silent Wolf?
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1313LoveGirl1313

I don't normally make these comments but as a fellow writer I have been having trouble with my writing. I won't to write in First Person POV but the girl in my book is very humble and quiet, always hating herself and second guessing so I can't write it in First Person POV because it sounds toout-going, boastful, and self-centered for the timid girl. 
          Can anyone help me out with this?

1313LoveGirl1313

@Panda97163 I don't know, that soumds like w hat I'm doing
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Jtnuvdl

@1313LoveGirl1313 You could try writing it in third person and have the narrator notice how the girl is acting and have her show the actions of second guessing and hating herself I just don't know how to show those so I cant help you there lol
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