Plotdevelopment Stories

Oh god it's still going

This story is a guide to the story structure I use in every chapter and every character arc I write. If you've ever stalled halfway through a story or felt like something was missing, this might help. I use Dan Harmon's Story Circle, and I'm going to try to break it down in a way that makes sense

Aletha Fárence's world becomes confusing. She's a demigod, a daughter of Poseidon. Percy's sister. Aletha's life becomes even more confusing, her mother is a daughter of Aphrodite, making her a legacy. No one knows how lethal her legacy and paternal powers combined are... Until Annabeth almost loses her hearing after being exposed to Aletha's grief-stricken lullaby after Lila Fárence dies. It is a secret Annabeth and Clarisse keep. Aletha, furious that Annabeth could've died because of her powers of SirenSong, refuses to speak once they arrive at camp, where she gets teased mercilessly not being able to bend water like Percy (which she can't do unless she sings), for not being able to speak(though that is a lie), and not being able to fight (also extremely false). One day, Nico di Angelo happens upon her while she is singing. "Who is this mute, but not mute girl? And why is she in Percy's cabin? What in the name of Cerberus did I miss?" #193 in #plottwist January 8, 2019

Short bios and stories of certain characters to come in"Remember the way in"

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