Balika Badhu- Kacche Umar Ke...

By tanzila_tuly03

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It's a story of child marriage. Story of that age when there was no mobile, the only communication method was... More

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Important
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Ignore mistakes please 🙏

Shweeta: Avni beta tomorrow you & Neil will go to your father's house for astomangola & you both will come back day after tomorrow.

Avni: OK maa ji.

Shweeta: go & take rest.

Avni go to the room Neil is already present there. Avni go to him

Neil: did you eat anything?

Avni:(in mind) now I am gone. He will eat me today.

Neil: Avni I am asking you something..

Avni: h.. Haa I... I have.

Neil: what??

Avni: fr..fru.. Fruits..

Neil: really...

Avni go away & look other side

Avni: of course. why should I lie to you?

Neil: When did I say you were lying?

Avni bit her tongue.

Neil: Avni look at me..

Avni don't turn Neil go to her & make her turn to his side.

Neil:Why do you lie when you can't say it?

Avni look down

Neil: Avni let's go with me now. You will have something right now.

Avni: Neil only 2 hours more..

Neil: but Avni...

Avni: please Neil (cute pout)

Neil: ok. But don't pout like this.

Avni: why Neil?

Neil: haar kio ka answer nahi hota Avni

Avni: ooo.

Neil: hmmm

Avni:Don't make excuses Neil Khanna. Admit that you don't know the answer.

Neil face-palm.

Neil: (himself) this girl..

Avni: what are you thinking. Admit it Neil

Neil: yaa yaa my babies would be mother.

Avni: good.. What did you say?

Neil pull her she crush with Neil.

Neil: did I say anything wrong?

Avni look down.

Neil: wifey look at me & say.. Won't You be the mother of my children

Avni feel shy

Neil: Avni answer me.

Avni: I don't know.

Avni push him & run away

Neil smile.

At night

In dinner table

Prakash: Neil tomorrow you have to go to your in law's house with bitiya rani.

Neil: ok baba

After dinner everyone go to their room. Neil is upset.

Avni: I am very happy. After how many days I will meet my maa baba dada boudi.

Neil: haa haa & also get rid from me
So you must be happy na.

Avni: rid??? How??? You are coming with me na??

Neil: yes but you will stay there na & I have to come back.

Avni: & who said that??

Neil: you are the one who said that you will go to your father's house. You have your school there, so you will stay there to continue your study.

Avni: yes I said that...

Neil: see you will..

Avni: wait tomorrow I will not go to stay there. I will come back with you.

Neil: really??

Avni: yes

Neil pull her cheeks & kiss her cheek.

Avni: Neil (angry look) why did you pull my cheeks?

Neil: oo that's mean I can kiss you...

Avni:when did I say that?

Neil: you said that why did I pull your cheek.. You don't say anything about the kiss.

Avni: I am feeling sleepy. Good night.

Neil: (smirk) ok good night

Avni go to bed sleep covering herself with duvet.

Next day morning

Avni perform Worship. & they get ready to go Mehta house. They take blessing from elders & leave for Mehta house.

After some time they reach Mehta house

Neela: Preeti beta welcome them.

Preeti welcome them.

Preeti: welcome bhai misri come inside.

They come inside.

Preeti serve them snacks & sweets. Neil is not eating properly.

Avni: Neil have sweets you love sweets na..

Neela: yes have sweets beta ji.

Then Avni friend come.

Avni: Neil you sit here I am coming.

Neela Avni listen.. But Avni run away. Avni take her friend to her room.

Avni: why did you lie to me?

Friend: what had I said?

Avni: yehi ki jamai babu ne tujhe kiss kiya or tu maa ban gayi(that brother in law kissed you & you become pregnant)

Friend: r e buddhu hai to ak number ki. (you are number one crazy). Par tujhe to ab pata chal gayi hogi na ki kese maa bante hai. (but now you know na how to get pregnant)

Avni: nahi Neil mujhe bola nahi abhi tak.(Neil hasn't told me anything yet)

Friend: kya Avni yhe bhi koi bole Wali chij hai... (what is this Avni is this matter of saying) Asse kiss ke bare me kon bola tujhe ki kiss karne se koi maa nahi banti..(who tells you about kiss that by kissing no one gets pregnant)

Avni: Neil ne. Mein usse boli ki tune asa boli ki kiss karne se maa bante hai..(I told him that you said if he kiss me I will get pregnant)

Friend: kya?? (what) Hey dugga maa iss akal di ki nahi(God did you give her brain or not) . Achha yhe bata phir tune kya boli..(now tell me what you have said after that)

Avni: Meine pucha ki to phir kase bante hai..(then I asked him then how to get pregnant) Usne bola ki mujhe jab maa ban na hogi to usse baata du oo tab mujhe bataye ga.(he told me to tell her when I wanted to get pregnant, and he would tell me then.)

Avni's friend faceplam..

Avni: hey dugga maa...(oooh God) Tu na bohat buri hai.. (you are very bad)

Friend: ab kya kiya Meine. (what had I done now)

Avni: Neil ne kaha tha ki humari baatein mein kisi ko na bolu.
(Neil forbade me to tell anyone about Neil and my conversation)

Friend: Mein teri saheli hu na. (I am your friend na) To tu mujhe bol sakti hai.(so, you can say to me) Or mein ne bhi to boli thi na tujhe kiss ki or oo dhud ki glass Wali baat.(I also told you about the kiss & milk)

Avni : accha hi ki thi tune issi liye to mein itni jaldi maa nahi bani teri tarha.(you did well that's why I don't get pregnant earlier like you) Meine usse dudh ki glass tab di jab usne waada kiya ki oo mujhe pakre ga nahi. (I gave him the glass of milk after he promised me that he would not catch me) Par phir bhi kiss kiya usne. (but still he kissed me)

Friend:iss ka matlab tum dono ki bich kuch nahi huya..(that means nothing happened between you both)

Avni: or kya hona hai..(what else to happen)

Avni's friend whisper in her ear..Avni's eyes widen

Avni: chi..

Friend: kya chi pati patni ki bich ye sab hota hai...(What the heck it is normal between husband and wife)

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Here is the another part
Please ignore mistakes🙏

Thank you
Take care
Stay safe
Lots of love








3rd October 2020

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