OUR CUTE FAMILY (✔)

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This story is about four brothers and four sisters. How the Maheshwari brothers ends up falling in love with... Більше

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Hello everyone 🙋
Thank you so much for all your love for the story.
So, on public demand here's an update of OUR CUTE FAMILY😁. As most of you no....not most but almost everyone😂 wanted this to be updated so here it is.

I again made it super fast and as a return gift I just want your comments. Pleaseeee comment about this part. It'll make me happy😇.

Keep supporting. Luv u all ❤.
Enjoy reading.

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All were waiting for Raglak to come out so that they can start with the match.

Kabeer: where are they?

Arjun (chuckling): maybe, busy in romancing.

All laughs.

Just then Ragini comes out.

She stands besides her BILs.

Ragini: so, ready to lose my lovely sisters?

The boys laughs.

"They're ready to make you lose" came Laksh's voice.

All looks in his direction. He was standing there with the football.

Ragini was looking at him with an open mouth and without blinking.

Arjun (whispers): bhabhi, control yourself and stop drooling over bhai. He's our opponent.

Ragini glares him. Arjun chuckles.

Laksh: so, Kabeer go and stand at your place.

Kabeer: actually, I'll not be able to play. My hand got hurt.

He says showing a bandage on his hand which was ofcourse fake.

Laksh smirks.

Ragini: oh, you're not hurt much, right?

Laksh: tumhe badi chinta h. (You're very worried about him.)

Kabeer was controlling his laugh tightening his lips.

Kabeer: don't worry angel, I'll cheer you up.

Ragini nods.

Laksh: so, let's start with the game.

Everyone nods.

Trio brothers: bhabhi, we have to win.

Ragini: yess...

Laksh: girls, we'll win.

Trio girls: ofcourse

Ragini: oh, overconfidence Mr Maheshwari.

Laksh: no, it's called self confidence Mrs Maheshwari.

Both smirks at each other.

Kabeer: let's do the toss.

Both Raglak comes in the centre and Kabeer tosses the coin in the air.

Raglak: head/tail

Head comes and Ragini wins the toss.

Ragini gives Laksh a look like "what say".

Laksh: game is still left.

Ragini: let's start then.

All nods and takes their positions.

Their servants were as the goal keepers and the game starts.

The ball was first with Ragini as they won the toss. She was kicking it here and there.

Kabeer (shouting): come on angel, you can do it.

Laksh looks at him angrily.

Kabeer smirks.

Ragini passes the ball to Sanskar. Sanskar was trying to do the goal when Swara comes in front of him.

Swara (focussing on the ball): Sanskar, I have a surprise for you.

Sanskar looks at her excited.

Sanskar: what's that?

"Sanskar/bhai" he heard Ragini, Ryan and Arjun's shout.

He looks at them and then downwards, the ball was gone😂.

Sanskar (gritting his teeth): Swara...

Now, the ball was with Laksh he smoothly takes it near the net and does the first goal.

Trio girls jumps in happiness.

Trio: wohoo...

Laksh looks at Ragini smirking.

Ragini and her BILs huffs.

Kabeer: don't worry beautiful. You can do it.

Laksh (gritting his teeth): I badly want to murder him right now.

Kabeer get's hiccups.

Kabeer: he's cursing me.

•••••••••••

Misha was moving towards the net kicking the ball when Ryan comes in her way.

Ryan: chipkali, you don't know a bit about football. Look how you're playing?

Misha: shut up you bandar.

Both were trying to snatch the ball from each other and Ryan takes it away successfully and the ball directly goes in the net.

Misha pouts. Ragini jumps and hifies with her BILs.

Laksh: don't worry girls. We can do it.

••••••••••••

The ball was with Arjun and he was taking it towards the net with full concentration just then Laksh comes in front of him. Laksh was trying to snatch it and was about to get successful in it but...

Kabeer (shouting): my angel's team is gonna win.

Laksh looks at him shocked.

Laksh (gritting his teeth): MY ANGEL...

He was fuming. He turns to look at Arjun but he was there.

Laksh: shit...

Ragini: aww... Mr Maheshwari

Laksh glares her and then Kabeer.

Kabeer shrugs chuckling.

Laksh runs towards Arjun and takes away the ball from him and it reaches the net again.

Laksh smirks looking at Kabeer who gives him a whatever look in return.

••••••••••••

Ragini was taking the ball towards the end of the ground when Laksh comes in her way. They both were trying to take the ball away. For a moment Laksh looked at Ragini and in that moment Ragini winked at him making her lips in a kissing posture.

Shocked was an understatement for Laksh. He got freezed at his place with a red face and Ragini took away the ball doing a goal.

He comes back to the world hearing the shouts of Ragini and her BILs.

He looks at Ragini who was looking everywhere but not in his direction.

Laksh (in mind): I'll see you.

••••••••••••

Only a few minutes of the match were left. The ball was again with Arjun and Naina comes in his way.

He looks up at her and get's lost in her beautiful face. The way she was looking at the ball with full concentration was making his heart jump. She was looking very cute according to Arjun😂. Naina get's a chance and passes the ball to Laksh.

Ragini, Ryan and Sanskar hit's their palms on their foreheads.

Arjun bites on his tongue realising what he did.

Laksh was trying to reach the goal and Ragini was besides him trying to snatch the ball from him. Both were focussing on the ball.

Ragini: Laksh, I think the match will be a tie. Why are you making so much effort?

Laksh (still focussing on the ball): the game is still on wifey.

That's it, Ragini get's lost in his word WIFEY.

Kabeer: come on beautiful, do the goal... come on... angel... angel...

But his words were not affecting Laksh now as his complete focus was on the ball. It was like his old passion dominated him. He takes the ball away while our Ragini was still lost.

Trio brothers were trying to stop Laksh from doing the goal but it was not possible to stop the football lover Laksh Maheshwari in any way because the desire he was keeping in himself from the past ten years overpowered everything.

And...

"Goal" shouts Laksh and his SILs in happiness as they won the match.

Trio sisters were jumping in happiness. They were showing their tongues to Ragini and her BILs.

And their shouts brings Ragini out of her dreamland. She looks at Laksh who was smiling brightly.

She never saw him smiling this much openly till now. His today's smile was something different and genuine and it was raising her heartbeats. It was his happiness of playing his favorite sport, his passion after ten years. She too smiles seeing her love smiling.

Ryan: bhabhi, why are you smiling? We lost the match.

Ragini (still smiling): your bhayu won that means I won.

The brothers looks at her surprised. They too smiles at her.

Everyone were standing together.

Trio sisters (in a singing tone): losers... losers... losers...

Ragini and the brothers glares them.

Misha: so, Mr bandar get ready. Omg I'm so excited.

Swarna: we too...

Kabeer comes towards them.

Laksh (to Ragini): I want to talk to you.

He holds her hand.

Kabeer: angel...

Ragini: Laksh wait Kavi wants to say something.

She was trying to avoid Laksh after what she did during the match.

Laksh: he's more important?

Ragini shakes her head.

Laksh pulls her with him.

Arjun: what happened to bhai suddenly?

All others: dont know?

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Raglak's room:

Laksh was standing in front of Ragini, crossing his arms around his chest while Ragini was looking at the floor.

Laksh: look at me!!

He ordered.

Ragini raises her eyes to look at him.

Laksh: what was that?

Ragini (innocently): what?

Laksh (rolling his eyes): like you don't know what I'm talking about?

Ragini: I don't know?

Laksh: don't act innocent. I know you're knowingly avoiding the topic.

Ragini: huh, when you know that I'm avoiding it then why are you asking me?

Laksh shakes his head in disbelief.

Laksh: why you did that?

Ragini (showing her teeth): just to tease you.

Laksh frowns.

Laksh: seriously, you idiot girl.

Ragini (trying to divert his mind): why you pulled me like that? Kavi was trying to say something.

Laksh: again Kavi!! Don't you get tired of him?

He asks irritated.

Ragini: why? What's the problem?

Laksh: nothing...

Ragini: oh, wait a minute. Don't tell me that you're feeling JEALOUS of Kavi?

She asked shocked.

Laksh: je... jea... jeal... jealous... I.. I'm not jealous. Why would I be jealous?

Ragini: it's confirmed from your stammering that you're jealous of my bond with him. Omg... omg... Mr Maheshwari is jealous.

She starts jumping up and down.

Laksh holds her to stop her.

Laksh: stop it. There's nothing like that.

Ragini: no, you're lying. I know you're feeling jealous. Now I understood why you pulled me away when he was trying to shake hand with me and why you came out later that night when you we're not willing to. And why you asked me about how I know about his likes and dislikes. Omg, I'm so happy that you're feeling jealous. La.. la... laa...

She literally started dancing😂.

Laksh looks at her unbelievably.

Laksh (in mind): seriously, what's there to get this much excited and happy if I'm feeling jealous? And I'm not feeling jealous.

He was convincing himself.

Laksh: stooopppp...

He shouts when she didn't stop.

Ragini stops smiling sheepishly.

Laksh: you lost the match?

Ragini nods.

Laksh: now, you have to obey my orders?

Ragini nods again.

Laksh: so, it's 10 in the night now. My first order is that you'll not speak until tomorrow night's 10. That means you'll not speak a single word for a day. Got it!!

Ragini looks at him shocked. She was feeling like someone was snatching her life from her for a day.

You can imagine lightening effects and dramatic music in the background, just like in serials😂.

Come on yaar he's ordering Ragini the chatter box to not to utter a single word for a whole day. Itna atyachaar😌.

Ragini: no no Laksh not this please. You know na I can't live without talking please.

She looks at him with puppy eyes.

Laksh: that's why I'm ordering you not to talk. Now stop talking otherwise I'll increase the time from one day to two days. And if I'm saying this that means I mean it.

Ragini shakes her head in no and keeps her finger on her lips.

Laksh: good girl.

He leaves for the washroom.

Ragini looks in his direction with a crying face.

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So, how was the match? Do you guys found it worth reading?

What about Laksh's first order😂?

Please vote and comment.

Next: Ragini on mute mode. It'll be too much fun😎.

Ignore any mistakes.
Thank u🤗
Be happy always😀

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