From another point of view (O...

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These are outtakes from my fanfiction story: 'Trust me'. These outtakes either didn't make it into the final... المزيد

Outtake #1: Because ice would melt
Outtake #2: Punishment enough
Outtake #3- Falling Apart

Introduction and list of outtakes

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Author's note:

WARNING: This introduction contains Spoilers from 'Trust me', and will not make sense to anyone who has not read it. Therefore, if you have not read or completed reading 'Trust me', I encourage you to stop reading this Introduction, and return to my profile where you can read the story these outtakes were drawn from.

But thank you so much for your interest in my outtakes! I hope you will return soon ;)

If you want to suggest an outtake you would like me to write, please send me a message outlining your idea, and I will tell you whether it is on my list or not. You never know, I might love your suggestion! :)

Copyright: The plot lines and dialogue depicted in this story are of my own creation, and are not to be copied/pasted onto other websites or used without my expressed written permission. Therefore, all rights to this story are my own (with much thanks to Stephenie for creating such a wonderful world), so please don't plagiarise my hard work :) Thank you!

From another point of view (outtakes from 'Trust me')

Introduction

Before you guys get too excited, just letting you know that this post is not an outtake, merely an introduction to the outtakes, as well as a list of all the outtakes I plan to write.

For those who have read 'Trust me', thank you for taking a look at the outtakes! I really hope I will be able to create some interesting alternative perspectives for you!

Please note that I have not written any of the listed outtakes (see below), except for two of the later ones. Given that I intend to upload outtakes in chronological order (in line with the events in 'Trust me'), it will be a while before I post up the first outtake (sorry!). But I thought I would take this opportunity now to inform you guys which outtakes I plan to write. This will also give you the opportunity to suggest any outtakes you would like to read before I post up the first outtake on the list (in case your idea occurs before my first outtake, in the chronological sense).

Now, in saying this, I unfortunately won't be able to make an outtake for everyone's suggestions. I will only take up an idea if I can think of an interesting 'twist' to it. Ie. There needs to be something substantially different about this new perspective compared to the one used in 'Trust me'. So I hope that seems fair???

There are thirteen outtakes I will definitely write (listed below), so there is room to write, say another two? But at the same time, I am perfectly happy to stick with these thirteen, but if you have any good ideas, please let me know, because I am writing these outtakes for you guys :)

Also, as a little side note: I am starting my masters degree in Clinical Psychology this year, so I will not have much time to write. So all I can guarantee is that all of the outtakes will be posted by the end of the year. I'm so sorry I cannot be more precise about the timing! I hope to have all of the outtakes done before this, but I have yet to start my degree so am not sure how busy I will be. I will keep you posted in that regard.

Thank you once again for being such amazing readers! I hope the following list of outtakes will excite you a little- or perhaps a lot? :D

Please review and let me know what you think!

List of Outtakes (in chronological order)

1. 'Because ice would melt'- Edward's POV of the fever scene. I know some of you were interested to read how Edward reacted when Carlisle suggested skin-on-skin contact. And now you'll know!

2. 'Punishment enough'- Rosalie's POV of the chapter 'Don't push me'. This outtake will begin from Jacob's phasing at the Cullen's, to when Jacob leaves and Carlisle is able to complete his 'lecture' of Rose. I imagine this will be quite a long outtake.

3. 'Falling apart'- Jake's POV from straight after the battle with the newborns, to Edward's returning to the room (after him leaving to talk to Jake's family outside) during Carlisle's POV in 'Trust me'.

4. 'My fault'- Edward's POV of the chapter 'Dead man walking'.

5. 'Jacob has imprinted...'- this outtake will be from multiple perspectives showing Edward, Jasper, Alice, and Emmett's reactions to Jake imprinting- exactly where were they when it happened, how they found out, and when Edward's siblings saw Ness for the first time (as I didn't really make this clear in 'Trust me').

6. 'She fell'- A little bit of drama occurs at the Cullens when Renesmee falls over whilst under Jacob's care. Everyone is fussing over her to make sure she is okay. Jacob is half panicking, half berating himself for being careless. Ironically, the little girl is the only one not panicking; she's fine, so her father steps in to calm the rest of their family before things get out of control. From Jacob's perspective.

7. 'The competition'- Bella is no longer a newborn, and Emmett insists on a Cullen vs Cullen competition (with some wolves and a half vampire on the side :)). Not sure whose perspective I will write this outtake from (if you have any preferences, let me know!). I'll keep you posted!

8. 'Almost letting the cat out'- Instances of when Alice, Emmett, Rose, Esme, Jasper, and Carlisle nearly said something about Jake imprinting on Ness before she knew about Jake's feelings for her.

9. 'How dare he?' - What Edward witnessed while Renesmee was dreaming. This will be far more detailed than in 'Trust me' as what Edward saw/what Ness dreamed will be described. I plan to do this tastefully, but I honestly will not be offended if you choose not to read this outtake due to its more explicit nature. Nevertheless, I thought some of you may be curious to know what Edward saw.

10. 'The unexpected team'- This particular outtake is dedicated to one of my amazing reviewers: ZenNoMai. They love Rosalie and Jacob, and was hoping I would write another friendship-like scene with the two of them (they loved the chapter 'Honesty' when Rosalie apologised to Jacob after being cruel to him in the chapter 'Don't push me').

So this outtake is for you (surprise!)!

Thank you for being such an amazing reviewer :)

This outtake will be from Rosalie's POV. I am quite excited about it because it is a side plot that I thought of after ZenNoMai asked whether I could create a Rose/Jake moment. This will not be a romantic outtake, but one of friendship and camaraderie. That is all I am going to say, as I want the details of the outtake to remain a surprise ;)

11. 'While we danced...'- This outtake will take place at the wedding reception. Again, there will be multiple perspectives, as each of the Cullens tells us what happened when they danced with either Ness or Jake.

12. 'The silent goodbye'- Edward's POV when he and Jake are saying goodbye during Jasper's POV in part III of the epilogue. This outtake has already been written.

13. 'The Talk'- this outtake was actually in the original epilogue (part III), but I decided to leave it out because I thought it was slightly out of Edward's character. But it was really fun to write, so I thought you guys might like to read it! This is the other outtake that has already been completed. It is from Edward's POV, and you can probably gather from the title what the conversation is about :P

14. 'Our little girl'- Bella's POV of what happened back at the Cullen's house after Ness and Jake left for their honeymoon.

15. 'Our home'- The moment when the Cullens and pack members show Jake and Ness through their new home. They will both be in for a shock! I plan to write this from Esme's perspective (as she is the only Cullen not to have a POV in 'Trust me').

So how do these sound? If there were any outtakes you were hoping to see, or any I promised you guys (but have forgotten), please let me know!

Thank you again for being such amazing readers! I promise to upload each outtake once I have finished writing it. Updates will probably be inconsistent though, but I will try to keep you updated as best I can.

Thank you for reading this introduction to 'From another point of view'!

I appreciate ALL of you SO, SO much!!!

I can't wait to read your reviews and suggestions :D

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