TORN

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Jazmine sacrificed her own dreams so that Odell could live his, no questions asked! But now that the tables h... Daha Fazla

Prologue
Chapter One: Old habits die hard
Chapter Two: Trust
Chapter Three: Queen Olivia
Chapter Four: Deal Breakers
Chapter Five: Life Itself
Chapter Six: Mr. Steal Your Girl
Chapter Seven: Two can play that game
Chapter Eight:
Chapter Nine: Tour Life part one
TORN
Chapter Eleven: Tour Life part three
Chapter Twelve:
Chapter Thirteen:
Chapter Fourteen: Fourth of July Shenagagins part one
Chapter Fourteen: Fourth of July Shenanigans part two
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Chapter Fifteen:
Chapter Sixteen: Petty Wars
Chapter coming tomorrow...
WARNING: Please read
Writers Block, omg omg omg
I KNOW YALL HATE ME
Chapter Seventeen
Chapter Eighteen: Oh Shit! Part One
Chapter Eighteen: Oh Shit! Part Two
New Book Alert.
Chapter Nineteen:
NEW BOOK ALERT: Here's the first chapter Enjoy!
NEW BOOK ALERT
Chapter Twenty: Psycho Augusta
Author's Note:
Chapter Twenty One part one
Hi my loves
Yallll
Major key
Chapter Twenty One part two
Feedback
Guess what?
Chapter Twenty Two - Trials and Tribulations part one
New book alert:
Chapter Twenty Two - Trials and Tribulations part two
Memories Faded update
Chapter Twenty Two- Trials and Tribulations part three
Chapter coming soon.
Chapter Twenty Three- Suck a nigga ___ or sumthin
Bruh
Chapter Twenty Four
Chapter Twenty Five part one: Tables Turn
Chapter Twenty Five part two: Tables Turn
Chapter Twenty Six: Baby Mama
Chapter Twenty Seven: Shame part one
Chapter Twenty Seven part two
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
Chapter Twenty Eight
Quick Question
just wait on it.
New Book Alert: Second Chances
Chapter Twenty Nine
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Chapter Thirty
Giants vs. Vikings
Wedding Time:
Chapter Thirty One: part one
VOTES
Chapter Thirty One: part two
quick question.
Chapter Thirty One: Part three
Would you read this?
Draft Pick
Chapter 31: part four
Chapter 32: It's Lit! intro
Where are yall?
Chapter 32: It's Lit! part one
Chapter 32: It's Lit! part two
Chapter Thirty Three
I'm always up to something!!!!
Chapter 34
Chapter 35
Chapter 36
Chapters coming soon🤦🏾‍♀️
Chapter 37(Im back y'all😫🙏🏾)
VOTE FOR A SEQUEL.
Torn 2 - ( snippet)
TORN 2 Chapter 1 is up!!
TORN 2

Chapter Ten: Tour Life part two.

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Odell

"Faaaaam!" I yelled giving my bro Kav a huge hug. I haven't seen this nigga in so long! He finally made his way to Jersey to visit a nigga!

"What's good" He said chuckling grabbing his bag as we walked into my house. "Man, I missed y'all niggas bible! How's Baby Mama and Little Livi?" Kav asked as we walked outside to my patio joining Jarvis and Vic.

"Man, I haven't talked to you in so long! Sit nigga, grab a beer. It's a long story" I said chuckling sitting down. "Aw Damn" He mumble grabbing the beer from me, sitting down.

I spent an hour and a half filling this nigga in on the whole August situation. Kav been my day one nigga since LSU, I know he about to cut into me the LONG way. Oh God.

"First of all, I told you don't propose until you know she's ready. Nigga y'all weren't even together a full week before you get to tripping proposing and shit!" Kav blurted out laughing. I chuckled and shook my head. I hate to admit it, but he's right. I did kind of jump the gun but still. I love my Jazmine.

"Everybody knows I love Jazmine, truthfully if we were still just fucking I would of still proposed. She knows she's the only woman I want to spend the rest of my life with. Don't need a title for that" I said looking up at him.

"That's real shit bro. But Kav is right" Jarvis added. Vic sat back and shook his head. He knew first hand this entire situation, most times he keeps me level-headed. I wanted to be so upset at Jazz a couple times but he broke my ass down.

"Well.. let's get ya mind off all this. Club hopping tonight! Like old times!" Kav suggested smiling. Over the past couple months I've become a homebody. I don't do that clubbing shit anymore, it use to really get me in trouble.

"Nigga, you know I don't go out to the club! How long you gone be here anyway?" I asked. This man loves Jazmine as my girl, but he always up to something waving the coldest bitches over my head tempting me and shit!

"I'll be here two weeks. Why?" He said looking at me raising his eyebrow.

"Let's throw a party next week. August tour coming here and I need something to distract me from pulling up to that damn tour bus as soon as it stops." I said laughing.

The guys were silent before erupting into hella laughter.

"Now that was funny" Jarv said cracking up. "But we got you dog. Good distractions" Kav said rubbing his hands like Birdman. Oh No... I got a feeling next week is going to be crazy shit.

Jazmine

(First show in Pennsylvania)

As soon as I got in my room I called Odell, because I knew that tonight was going to be a busy night. At first I was gone tell him I slept in August's bed but I knew not to say shit. Don't need him tripping already. It was harmless.

-

I heard soft knocks at my door and I sighed. I just want to be laid up talking to him for a while before dealing with this tour"Dell hold on okay baby" I mumble fixing my shorts as I looked in the peep hold. 

The fuck you want August.

I turned back to my phone and saw him simply smiling at me. 

"Baby, let me call you back. I gotta talk to August" I mumble biting the inside of my lip. 

He pouted and chuckled. 

"Alright beautiful, I have practice in a couple hours anyway, so I will talk to you later. Love you" He said blowing me a kiss. I laughed and blew him one back. "I love you stink" I said before hanging up.

I opened the door and August rushed in with his assistant and hella clothes behind him. 

"The fuck. I already texted you what you're wearing" I said rolling my eyes. He said nothing as his assistant sat everything up and then left. I closed the door before walking back towards him. 

"Hellooo! Can you not hear? Get that nigga back in here what the hell!" I said a bit louder than the first time. 

He looked up from his phone and chuckled. I rolled my eyes and went to pick out his outfit choices.

"I'm sorry" He said suddenly as I fished through the bin of bandannas. I looked up and smiled.

"Its cool. I do apologize for always bringing him up. I'm sure its annoying sometimes. I just.... I treasure my relationship, well the one we had for a short amount of time, and I would never be able to live with myself if I cheated on him" I said trailing my words off. He nodded his head and smirked.

"So you do like Yung huh?" He asked chuckling.

"I mean, I see what the ladies see in you. Smart, attractive, talented guy" I said laughing some. 

"That was beautiful" He said wiping fake tears. "No but forreal, like I said before I cannot help that I flirt wit cha. I'll try to stop" He mumbled. 

"I guess I can work with that." I said shrugging my shoulders. He's really not getting the picture here. I don't want to quit because this paycheck bout nice as hell. But as long as he's willing to pipe the shit down, then I'm good. Eventually it's going to bit him in the ass, I just want to be in the clear of Odell when it happens.

- Day before New York Show

"Leighhhhhhhhh" I screamed as we ran to each other in the hotel lobby. 

Leigh was finishing her internship she had her senior year in New York which was dope, she was considering moving to New York once she finished anyway.

"I missed you so much. Goodness! We have to go shopping!!!! But pleaseeeeee introduce me to his fine ass!" She said smiling wide as she watched him and Mone get off the elevator. I rolled my eyes and laughed. "Aright, act normal girl. I don't have time for you acting like a groupie." I mumble as I waved August over. 

"This is Odell's sister Leigh, Leigh this is Au-" I began to say. 

He smiled wide and took her hand and kissed it. "How you doing beautiful" He said smirking.

"I'm about to die" She said smiling hard watching him carefully. She's hilarious and so is he. Trying to make me jealous? Shit. Why do I even care?

I looked down and saw my phone vibrating. It was Dell. I smiled and answered. 

"Hello?"

* background voices *

"Odell, your room is so nice"

"Thanks Ma"

"So, you in this big ol house by yourself? The FUCK

"Yeah, I guess so" He chuckled. It was silence and then I heard kissing noises. I KNOW YOU LYING. 

I clenched my jaw and dragged Leigh away from August.

"What the hell? Where you going?" August asked jogging after us. "We will be back. This is an emergency" I said in a stiff tone grabbing her rental car keys from her back pocket. Leigh looked so confused as I pulled her out the door. I jumped in the rental and pulled off as she closed the door. 

"Bitch, the fuck is you doing? What's wrong??" She yelled laughing. 

"I'm going to kill your brother." I mumble unlocking my phone face-timing Jarvis. 

He answered quick and had a look of 'oh shit' on his face. 

"Where is Odell? I tried to ask in a sweet tone clenching my jaw.

"Uh.." He stuttered. He looked drunk his damn self. I heard loud ass music and bitches. LOTS of em. BET!

Leigh snatched the phone from me and hung up. She slammed her purse down and took off her earrings. "Oh we whooping ass today! Odell having a party? I'm assuming you didn't know?" She asked as she put her earrings up.

"BITCH THAT NIGGA IS IN HIS MASTER BEDROOM WITH A BITCH. I'm going to cut his fucking dick off!" I yelled speeding down the freeway. 

"Whaaaaaaat! You're lying! Yeah it's on and poppin!" She yelled taking her jewelry. 

I'm glad I got my baby with me, she already know what's up. I want to know who put Odell up to this fucking party bullshit. I got a platter for their head as well. 

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Lmfao. It's about to be lit. LIT. That's all Ima say

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