KUCH TO HAI TERE MERE DARMIAN...

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This story is based on balveer returns .I am not satisfied by story and characters .So I am writing on my own... Mehr

character sketch
proclaim
A MYSTERIOUS DREAM
DEBANYA MEET
A DILEMMA
A PUNISMENT
A New start
A NEW PAYING GUEST
A FAN GIRL
AN ACCIDENT
The Truth
THE BALVEER
A SUSPENSE
THE SUSPENSE PART 2
TIMNASA ESCAPE
A HIJACK
VIVAN'S PLAN
A KIDNAPPING
MYSTERY MAN ENTRY
MISSION BEGAN
A RIDDLE
DEV IN ANANYA'S COLLEGE
A DANGER AND A DOUBT
24 HOURs
KARMA RETURNS
EK INTEZAR
A BELIEVE AND A BETRAYAL
one step ahead
ANANYA'S TRUTH
A TRAP
Ek Jhalak
A Firing
DARD
KAAL KILVISH
ATTACKS
THE TIMNASA
Ananya and Shaurya Meet
Nursing DABBU
ANANYA'S CONFUSION
A DREAM
Dabbu is balveer
A PUNISHMENT
EK KHULASA
REASON
Ananya's past part 1
A PROMISE
KARELA
DEV'S LIFE IN DANGER
An unknown letter
RESTLESS VIVAN
LORI
STONE STATUES
Dabbu and vivan
SOLVED BUT UNSOLVED
Balveer v/s nakabposh
A NEW ENTRY
Kaal veer
BALVEER RETURNS
Ananya and nakabposh last meet.
A new conspiracy
Dev's jealousy
Baal Pari and Ananya
A Surprise
Dev and Ananya day out
Ananya is in Danger
A New Enemy
Water Problem 1
Vivan Identity Revealed
Water Problem 2
Reunion
INTERCHANGED
Dance party 1
Dance party 2
Dance party 3
MILSA'S CONFESSION
SAWAL
Confusion
Jhalak 2.O
DATE
A wish
Angry Ananya😠😠
Voting
Dev's past part 1
Baal veer's past 1
Covers😃😃🙏🙏
Attack on Pari lok
Timnasa and Balveer Fight
UNCONSCIOUS DEV
Veer Diwas
THREE MAGICAL WORDS
DREAM GIRL
Realisation
Its Birthday
Birthday Party
Someone's Arrival
Shaurya
MAR JAU YA JI LU JARA
And Its not over yet
ITS BACK

Kaal Sastra

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Double Update 🎷🎶🎶🎸🎵🎵(
(iss baar sachi wala 😄🥰)

In veer lok

Baal veer-"Saurya ,mujhe lagta hai mere pass ab jyada waqt nhi hai.Aaj mai kuch pal ke liye behosh ho gya"

Saurya-"pariyo ne mujhe btaya tha Baal veer .Aur mai adrishya(invisible) roop me wahi tha"

Baal veer-"samajh me nhi aa raha suarya ,kya karu? Kaal sastra ke prabhav(effect) ke karan samay ke sath
meri hridaygati( heartbeat) kam hoti jaa rahi hai .Ab to dhadkan sunai bhi nhi deti..Wo waqt dur nhi jab MERI DHADKAN HAMESA KE LIYE RUK JAYEGI.
Shaurya mai jane se pehle apni jimedari ko puri karna chahta hu. Timnasa ka ant dekhna chata hu.

Saurya eyes become wet hearing him .He looks at the person who is the pillar of the whole veer lok .A pillar,who himself is hollow but still he is a strong support for them and no one except him knows that this pillar is going to fall soon.

Shaurya-"Baal veer hume tumhare uttradikhari ki jarurat issliye hi pari thi ki tumhare na rehne per wo tumhari Jimedari uthaiye.

Baal veer-"ha shaurya, mai janta hu .Aur mai ye bhi janta hu ki ab vivan pehle se jyada jimedar aur samjhdar ho gya per Abhi aur bhi  bahut kuch baki hai usko sikhane ke liye"

He recalls that time when he first saw Vivan,who at that time was most irresponsible and naughty kid but good from heart .He remembers  when he got to know that he is his successor .How much tensed he was? It was not easy to groom him and he had to face many difficulties .He chuckles remembering those days.

Shaurya-"Baal veer mujhe tumhe Kuch aur bhi btana tha"

Baal veer-"kya Shaurya?
Shaurya-"Kaal sastra ka prabhav tumhare hridya ke sath sath tumhare mastisk per bhi hua tha jiske karan tum varso tak behosh the .

Baal veer-"ha ,janta hu.Per Rani pari ke aishaudhi(medicine) ke karan kaal sastra ka prabhav mere mastisk se smapt ho gya tha na"

Saurya -"ha,Baal veer per tumhare hriday per jo war hua hai uska upchar kisi bhi aushadi dwara nhi ho sakti hai .Issliye kaal sastra ka prabhav abhi bhi tumhare sarir per hai.jiske karan agar tum kaal sastra ke prabhav se behosh hote ho to tum kabhi hos me nhi aa paoge.

Baal veer-"per mai kaal sastra ke prabhav se hi behosh hua tha saurya aur kuch pal me hi mujhe hosh aa gaya"

Saurya-" kaal kilvisk ke din bhi jab tumhare hriday me kaal sastra ke prabhav se dard hone lga tha ,tum bina aushadi liye hi thik ho gaye the"

He recalls that day .Yes,He was not able to take that serum because Ananya came there and started shouting.
Baal veer-"per aisa kaise ho sakta hai ?

Kaal sastra ,A weapon that is made by timnasa from the negative energy of all the evil power whom he killed ,can be used only once .But, unfortunately due to the reflection from the mirror ,its power hits him twice .One on the brain due to which he was in coma for years and other on the heart   which is  continuously decreasing his heart beat  .With each passing second he is one step nearer to the death.

Effect on brain is difficult to treat but can be treated with the help of rare magical process but Effect on heart can't be treated by any medicine or and its effect increases when he was emotionally hurt ,creating a unbearable pain in his heart which gets reduced with the help of a serum made from rare herbs of veer lok .but how this pain vanishes without that serum .
He is thinking all this when he feel that Ananya is calling him in fear.

So how was the chapter?
Baal veer ke questions ka Answer hai kya kisi ke pass(mere alawa😄😄)
Why ananya is calling baalveer in fear?

Precap-"Veer Diwas"






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