Hello, just A quick note.
One: this has not been checked over but it might have some things is missed.
Two: This may trigger some by the backgrounds of the characters, The main character is a kid whose family died in a storm, he has been living on the streets ever since( most of this is found in chapter 4).
Three: let me know if the chapters are too long/ short I can make them into two.
Four: I own the plot and characters.
five: feel free to comment with any tips or ideas
six: this is the first book I ever finished so yeah, it might be awesome it might suck.
seven: Okay, I'm done your probably annoyed with me so enjoy.