Yours Till Eternity

Por Taani10

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this is a Story which will define love emotions family bonding and many more..... As itz my story it will no... Mais

Introducing the Characters
1. Facade of Happiness
2. Clouded emotions
3. Hearts Interconnected
4. Brothers with golden heart
5. Day of Arrival
6. First Day of joining
7. Adjusting with the New normal
8. Equations
9. Bickerings
10. spatting at each other
11. Unknown meeting
12. Never ending fights
13. Not being rational
14. Secret that is known
15. Rift
16. Picking up fights
17. Incomplete meeting
18. Convincing
19. Finally meeting
20. Shocked with the reality
21. Taking care
22. New revealation
23. Desperate attempts
24. Twisty situation
25. Random bickerings
26. Trip
27. Kabir's revenge
28. Realisation of mistake
29. Appology
30. Taking care
31. Birthday
32. Hidden emotions
33. Pouring out feelings
34. Truth come across
35. Being emotional
36. Crazy Banters
37. start of a new bond
38. Turmoil
39. Piercing Emotions
40. Fragile moments
41. Understanding
42. Acknowledging the importance of life
43. Valentine's party
44. Drunk
45. Something Suspicious
46. Hijacked
47. Shattered hopes
48. Remorseful situation
49. Stirred emotions
50. Care and Concern
51. Emotions
52. nostalgia
53. Accepting the allegations
54. Accepting the hidden emotions
55. Revealation and Conflict
56. Helpless
57. Truth Exposed
58. Puzzled situation
59. Blunt actions
60. Sinking in the new reality
61. New changes
62. Little sparkles of joy
63. Fun and Insecurities
64. Mixed emotions
65. Green with envy
66. Bottled up emotions
67. Misunderstanding at itz Peak
69. Realisation
70. Caring
71. Regretting
72. Expressing Regret
73. Complete family
74. Mischievous morning
75. Diversed life
76. Prank or Reality?
77. Tough times
78. Hopes
79. Getting back to the Track
80. Delightful moments
81. Blooming love
82. Cute banters
83. Conflict between heart and Mind!
84. Past interference
85. Point of Retreat
86. Pacifying
87. Irrelevant Accusation
88. Confessions
89. Confused feeling
90. New bond and jealousy
91. Heart has given the Answer
92. Engagement with a Twist
93. Irony of Fate
94. Failed Attempts
96. Confrontation
97. Outburst of Family
98. Confessing the reason to the Brothers
99. Brothers bond
100. Uncertain situation
101. Fear of death
102. Secret deceision
103. Taking a tough call
104. Epilogue

95. Reality

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Por Taani10

Scene starts from Delhi

Ayu leaves from there angry hurt devastated...

while the moment Ayu stepped out kunj sat on the floor broken..

kunj cried... jiya rushed to him and hold him...

jiya tensed - Kunjjj..

Kunj just have nothing to say he just cried

jiya - Kunj plx sambhalo khudko...

kunj with tears - Kitna kuch keh dia meine use kitna kuch.... itna hurt kia meine use .. just because he trusted me...  ab vo kabhi ni ayega mere pass..  kbhi ni

jiya - Use takliff deke tum khud bhi kaha khush ho..  to kyu kar re ho ye sab! kunj plz abhi bhi wakt h .. lets just go there and tell them everything... 

kunj weep his tears -No.. never i wont...  i cant

Kunj stood up and about to leave..  but he felt dizzy. .  and about to fall..

jiya shocked and hold him - Kunjj!!!

she immidiately made him sit

kunj took heavy breathes

Jiya tensed and immidiately bring water for him...

Jiyaaa - Kunjj...  tumne apni medicine li thi? (tenses)

kunj quiet

jiya angrily tens - What is your problem kunj!! Ye sab kark baat thik ni hogi bas bigregi.. tum khud ek doctor ho usk baad bhi tum...

kunj sadly - Khud ek doctor hu tabhi to janta hu ki BOHOT ZYADA WAKT NHI H MERE PASS! 

jiya cried - Kunj plzz!!

kunj sadly smile - Sab kuch jante bujhte me vo dard me vo takliff kese dedu apni family ko ...

jiya - ye sab tum isliye keh paa re ho ! kyuki Us raat DELHI. me tum mere sath tha!!!

kunj look at her

***** Flashback the day they went to delhi and was returning back in the evening ****

In a market area..

kunj irritaated - God jiya ek din k liye dont u think its enough? raat ki flight h humari 

jiya - Aree to sale to sirf aaj ka laga h na ..  me sale kese miss kardu

kunj - Common tera ward drobe dekha h meine kapre rkhne ki jagah to h ni.. abhi or 2-3 hazar kapre or kharidliye

jiya - Shut up...  tu ye rob na tere gf ya biwi ko dikhana mujhe ni....

kunj roll her eyes - Vo is janam me shayed he banegi

jiya - Common yr ek heartbreak se tu life jina chordega kia

kunj sadly smile - ek bar ni 2 bar hochuka h ab to bhai dur he rahe ye sab mujhse to behtar h

Jiya - ha ha jese auntyji tujhe sari zindagi akele rehne degi... isnt it?

Kunj - Are unhe me smjha lunga... or wese bhi vo....(and he stopped suddenly,)

kunj started feeling dizzy and black out... suddenly the voice of jiya was fading from him...

Jiya startled - Kunj? kunj u okay?? 

kunj blink his eyes slowly and just fall on the ground unconscious..

jiya horrified - KUNJJJ!!!!

they were in the roadside

jiya tensed - Kunj? kunj.. wake up.. kunj!!

but kunj wss unconsious

people gathered and helped her towards her car and she reached hospital.... 

Next scene... from hospital

Kunj opens his eyes slowly and realised he was in a hospital.. 

Jiya and vansh were there

jiya super tensed - kunj? Are u okay??

kunj sat up..

jiya - kunj aramse plz! kia kar re ho

kunj smiled - me..thik hu dont worry

jiya hug him - you idiot . bohot dar gayi thi tujhe pata h!

vansh - Kunj abhi kesa feel kAr re ho

kunj smiled - m better... vansh ...  i think aj kafi exhaution hogaya isliye chkkar aa gya hoga... 

kunj looked at watch - oh god flight ka time to niklne wala h jiya lets go..

vansh - No kunj u cant go now.. mujhe kuch tests karne h tumhare!

kunj shocked - What.. but why? yr meine kaha to..

jiya angrily - tumhe sunai ni deta bhai ne kia bola...  humesha bas apni chalani h... hoge tum doctor but khudki body to check ni kar sakte na! so shut up...

kunj - Yrr par flight

Jiya - next flight pakar lenge ya zarurat pari to kal chle jaenge but abhi tera proper check up hoga! 

Kunj irritated.. but have to agree..

vansh then did some tests...

vansh - Kunj... kia ese chakkar tumhe frequently ate h??

kunj sighs - yr vansh tum

vansh - kunj plz ye meri duty h .. mere liye ye sab jnna zarury h

kunj - Samaj gya jiya ne bharkaya hoga na... tumhe.. yr vansh me thik hu trust me ...exhaustion hogya hoga nothing much and rahi baat chakkar ki to haa ate h kabhi kabar...

vansh sighs...

kunj - Ab can i go plz.. ghar pe sab bohot pareshan ho re honge!

Vansh - Fine... but plz ghar jake thora rest karna plz..

Kunj nodded and both left ..

And thatz how they missed the flight thar night

***** Flashback ends****

jiya - Us raat tum mere sath tha isliye ye hadsa hua . but ye hadsa to kbhi bhi hosakta tha na!  kia pata twinkl k samne he hojata..! tab kia karte?

kunj sadly - Hua to ni na?? or jab ni hua ... to me kyu janbuch k use dukh du...  wese he kis gam dukh dekhe h usne?  

jiya sadly - or isliye tumne uska DIL ISTARAH. TOR DIA..!!

Kunj sadly - torna to me bhi ni chahta tha lekin...

***** Flashback ****

It was there engagement preperation going on..  just a day before engagement.. 

Twinkl and kunj were sitting in a park side holding each other hands

twinkle rested her head on his chest

twinkle smile - You know kunj.. aj itne saalo baad me itni khush hui hu... and itz all because of you

kunj smiled and was caressing her hair

twinkl - I.. didnt beleive in love..  or relationship.. or something called forever .. but you made me realise that... aj TUMHARI. wajah se i am able to get back my normal self

kunj - pyaar hoty he ek khubsurat feeling  twinkle... itz very important for someone to get love...

twinkle hold his hand - KUNJ PROMISE ME YOU WON'T LEAVE ME EVER... TUM HUMESHA MERA SATH RAHOGE..   

Kunj smiled and about to promise That time he got a call from vansh

twinkl irritaated - whtz wrong with your phone now a days kbhi bhi aa jata h

kunj chuckled - ruko abhi class leta hu kon h jo humare romanc k time pe aa gya... tum tab tak ye bhutta khao

kunj hand over her one n left to attend the call

kunj happily - Ha. vansh..  bolo

vansh tensed - Kunj tumhari reports aa gayi h..

kunj smiled confused - Ha to... everything is ok na... mujhe to pata he tha..

but hus voice cuts

vansh - REPORTS ARE NOT GOOD KUNJ..!

kunj shocked.... 

*****. Flashback ends ****

jiya - jese he bhai ne tumhe reports k bare me bataya tumne tab he decide kar lia ki....

kunj bursted - to kia karta me!!! kia karta me ??? KESE KEHTA TWINKLE SE KI I AM SORRY ME ZINDAGI BHAR TUMHARA SATH NI DE PAUNGA!!  kese kehta ki... jisne tumhe pyar pe FOREVER pe yakin kArna sikhaya.. wohe tumhare sath FOREVER ni reh sakta!!! kese KEHTA ki PROMISE  ni kar sakta ki ZINDAGI BHAR SATH RAHUNGA!!! 

kunj cried - kese??? me bohot pyaar karta hu twinkle se bohottt ... or isiliye use or takliff me ni dekh sakta.. already she has suffered so much!!! ab meri wjh se wapas ss?? use dar h ki vo jisse pyaar karegi vo insaan use chork chla jaega!!! OR AGAR MERI BAAT USE PATA CHAL JATY ! TO USKA VO DAR YAKIN ME BADAL JAEGA!! FIR VO KHUD KO OR ZYADA PUNISH KAREGI!!  i.. i cnt let that happen..  or ghar me sab? PAPA DADU MUMMA AYU! Vo ye baat bardash he ni kar sakta.. us din us plane crash ki baat se dadu ki ye halat hogayi thi... to agar unhe pata chlega ki unka kunj unhe chork jaa ra h HUMESHA. k liye vo.. vo to JITEJI MAR JAENGE!! Ayu? vo mere bina apni life soch he ni sakta! vo tut jaega? or mumma papa?? itne saalo baad sab thik hua h unki life me... vo kese accept karenge... 

jiya - Par kunj.. tum itne negativ kyu ho... ye bhi to hosakta h na ki kuch...

kunj - no jiyaa!!! reports meine bhi dekhi h. mujhe pata h meri condition kia h.. kitni Complications h or chances kitne h  ! .. and kisi bhi doctor ne koi positiv respons ni dia... MERE SATH KABHI BHI KUCH BHI HOSAKTA H...KABHI BHI MERA DIL DHARAKNA BAND KAR SAKTA!  me nhi chahta vo log mujhe MARTA HUA DEKHE! NHI CHAHTA ME!!!  isse acha vo mujhse NAFRAT. kar le!! isse wohe acha h...!!

and kunj left to his room and lockdd it... 

jiya cried - i wish i could help you i wish...

while kunj cried in his room...

Kunj sat on the floor he was remembering the hurt and pain   he has given to his family and twinkle 

kunj remember the words which he said to kabir

kunj - m sorry dadu..! m really sorry... plz mujhe maaf kardena... hosake to... plz

while in mumbai...

Kabir was working in his laptop he felt like someone called him...

kabir look arround .. something just caught his heart..

kabir thinks - m.ujhe esa kyu laga ki kisine mujhe pukara h  kahi kunj to.... (then again) noo vo kyu yaad karega mujje... use to meri koi zarurat ni h.... vo to nafrat krta h mujhse... sirf or sirf nafrat...

kabir just turned off his laptop whenever his mind comes with kunjs topic he just feel blocked...

kunj has hurted him so badly..  that it pains him whenever he thinks about him..

and why wont he ....  he has loved his brother selflessly and in return he got hate? he never thought kunj will betray him like this his words still recall in his mind

*Mujhe to lagta h Ayu he sahi tha kash ap hote he ni humari life me*

kabir shivered with the thought of it

otherhand

Kunj cried Higging his picture - m sorry dadu m so sorry...

while ayu reached delhi.. 

Ayu was hurt broken he enterrd his face looks pale..

Fai was downstairs n happy - Ayu? itni jaldi aa gya bacche?

Ayu was quiet

juhi comes out n confused - Ayu? tumhara to kuch dino ka plan tha na to itni jaldi

Ayu hiding his tears - Haa vo... actually jis kam se gya tha vo hua ni... to mere liye bhi waha rehne ka or koi reason ni tha...

juhi - kia kam

Harsh - Kisi college k bare me jnne gaye tha kia??

Ayu sighs

juhi - Aree tujhe delhi kyu jana h yaha Mumbai me kitni achi achi colleges h..

Ayu sadly - mumma m very tired.. can i go to my room plz!

fai - haa travel krk aya h... thakan hogi na... jaa beta room me jaa me kuch khane ko

ayu cuts - No plz..

all startled

Ayu - Vo.. flight me khaya tha meine... abhi mujjr bilkul bhuk ni h...

ayu left from there...

juhi sadly - Kia hogya h ise...! harsh mera beta esa ni tha...

harsh sadly - humare tino bete he badal gaye h  juhi...  kunj to itna badal jaega meine kabhi socha bhi ni tha...  or usnr jo zakhm diye us wajh se baki dono bhi

juhi's eyes had tears she loves kunj and cant hear anything bad about him but what can she do.. when her son did wrong

otherhand

Ayu went to his room he was angry hurt and was in tears

words of kunj were roaming in his mind

Ayu hurt voice - Ap yahi chahte ho na ki me apse dur rahu . to ab yahi hoga... nhi aunga bhai .. kabhi ni aunga!  Ap agar kabhi bulaoge bhi na  to bhi ni.. kbhi ni.... (cried cuddling himself)

With tears hurt and pain the day passes by

Next day morning

Ayu comes out of the room and kabir too

both looked at each other...

kabir - Ayu tum kal kab aye?

Ayu - Subah he..

kabir - ohh.. ni vo i didnt saw you so..

Ayu - itz ok dadu..  wese bhi ap rehte he kaha ho ghar pe..  or jab hote ho.. u are always in your room...

Ayu passes a fake smile and about to go kabir hold his hand...

Ayu stopped

kabir sadly - Can you be honest with me

Ayu confused

kabir - Look ayu.. you can tell me ..agar tujhe mujhse koi shikayat h to... i.. i will try trust me i will try to change that flaws on me... because i...know i m. not a good brother... but.. i.. i really wanted to... isliye agar tere dil me agar mujhe leke koi baat h koi shikayat h to plz tell me .. dont bottle it up..

Ayu understood why he said that

Ayu just hug him - Aap jese bhi ho na bilkul best ho... kisne kaha ap ache bhai ni ho..  ap duniya k best bhai ho... bas apne jo khudko badal dia h na vo mat karo plz

kabir dont know what to say because the changes in him has come naturally after that incident ...

Ayu sadly - Me jnta hu jo kuch bhi hua use bhulna mushkil h...  lekin shayed yahi destiny h... ki HUME UNHE BHULNA HOGA...

Kabir shocked that ayu was saying this because Ayu was the only person who was supporting kunj till now

Kabir shock - Ayu??

Ayu just hug him to hide his tears - Ek bhai ko to khochuka hu ..apko ni khona chahta dadu...

kabir can feel his pain he caressed his back..

Ayu weep his tears and smile - Chaliye lets have breakfast together...

kabir - Ayu mujhe hospital..

Ayu cuts - ha chale jana but breakfast k baad

saying he drag kabir and made him sit...

arranged his plate... kabir has no interest to eat but for the sake of ayu he was quiet

Ayu - Chalo ye juic pio

kabir - me kha lunga ayu.. tu beth na

ayu - Me bethunga but pehle ap.. apne kal raat bhi kuch ni khaya tha na .. mujhe pata h 

ayu fed him kabir slowly ate from his hand... 

juhi was standing far away..  and smiled to see atleast kabir and Ayu were trying to be normal...  but her heart pains because she misses kunj

juhi thinks - sabkuch hoke bhi sab khali sa lagta h ... kunj k bina ye khalipan kbhi pura ni hosakta

otherhand in hospital..  delhi

Kunj and Jiya entered at a doctor's cabin.. Doc RISHABH MEHRA 

jiya smile -Hello doc Rishabh

Rishabh smile - Hey.. plz sit.. 

kunj and Jiya sat

rishab smile - So kunj..? How are you... 

kunj faked a smile - Better...

Vansh entered - Hey...

Rishabh - Lo aa gye doc vansh.. tumhara he intezar tha 

Vansh - Ha ana to mujhe tha he..  as i only referred him to you... kunj.. Rishabh is the best at his job... 

kunj smiled - ya i know... meine suna h ink bare me and itne din se yahi to sambhal re h sabkuch

Rishabh - well suna to meine bhi bohot h apke bare me doc kunj...  kafi critical cases handle kiye h apne

kunj smiled.. 

Rishabh - So kunj  ao tumhara check up kar lete h...

jiya - Aj to reports bhi ane wali h na kunj ki...

Rishabh smil - yeah. aty he hongi.. tab tak me uska check up kar leta hu

kunj lies down on bed and he checked his heart beat pulse rate and bp too... 

jiya and vansh tensed

vansh - any progress?

Rishabh didnt answer that

rishabh - Kunj... tumhare body me koi chngs feel kiya h tumne? after the new medicin?

kunj nodded in no

Rishabh - Black outs hote h??

Kunj was about to say no

jiya glared - Hote h doctor.. dont beleive him...  ye to kabhi kuch kehta ni h . kal bhi hua tha ise

vansh - Kunj? agar ese ho re h to tum jhut kyu bol re ho

kunj smile - Sach bolne se agar fayda hota to zarur bolta but kuch fayda h ni...m i right doc rishabh?

Rishabh sighs..

rishabh - Kunj listen . tum is tarah se hope chordoge to kese chalega.. abhi bhi sab kuch khatam ni hua h . we still have chance

kunj sadly - Or vo chances kitne h 2% ? 5%?  isse zyada to ni na...

rishabh - there are some examples ki patient recover hua h.. and they r leading a healthy life

kunj - Thatz once in a while.. rishabh... ye sahanubhuti tum kisi us patient ko dete jo medical field se na ho .. mujhe ni pls

jiya - kunj plz! tum kyu koi hope rkhna he ni chahte ...

rishabh - exactly kunj... tum agar is tarah hope chordoge to me ya koi bhi doc kuch ni kar payega! and me tumhare liye thora positive isliye hu kyuki we have one of the best doctor here in INDIA jo ese  but isi type k critical cases handle ka chuki h

jiya happily - Really? kon h vo... 

rishabh - Yes .. and agar tumlog chaho to i can fix an appointment with her

kunj alarmed - K.. kon? Kiski baat kar re h aap

Rishabh spoke - DOC TWINKLE KAPOOR!

Kunj froze  in shock jiya also shocked

Rishabh - She is one of the best doctor m sure vo kunj k case me koi positive hope

kunj bluntly - NOOO (and he stood up)

Rishabh shock n confused

kunj - i dont want that

rishabh - kyu kunj?? tumhe pta h duniya bhar se patients usk appointment k liye mar re  h... and here i m offering you..

kunj cuts - No meine kaha na nahi.... mujje usse treatment nhi karwana!! mera treatmnt sirf ap karenge thatz it..!!

saying he left... 

rishabh tens - kunj.. kunj listen to me

but he left

rishabh sighs

jiya - doc rishabh kia srf twinkle he ..

rishabh tensed - Kunj ki condition abhi jesi h...  usk sath kabhi bhi kuch bhi hosakta h..   uske  heart k valves buri tarah se damage ho re h... and surgery karne se i cant guarantee ki ye thik hoga!

vansh tensed - heart transplant...

rishabh - Heart transplant k baad bhi risk reh he jata h... kyuki agar kunj k body ne use support ni kia to heart failure hosakta h .. because ese bht cases huye h post surgery complications ki...thatz why i was suggesting to doc twinkle.. because she has brilliant knowledge about these typ of situation....haa kunj ka case kafi zyada COMPLICATED h... and esi situation bohot rare hoty h to i dont know doc twinkl ne esa particular case handle kia hoga ya ni... but i know she has brilliantly handled some very critical cases .. atleast we can give it a try...  but kunj to sun he ni ra

vansh - jiya..  hume kunj ko smjhana hoga vo is tarah apni life k sath khel ni skta

jiya - wohe to... vo bas ek he baat k piche par gya h ki koi guarantee ni h kou hope ni h!

rishabh - to use samjhao jiya... kyuki ab jo halat h uski .. agar tabyat bigri to mere hath pe bhi kuch ni reh jaega and plz make sure kisi bhi tarah ka shock anxiety excitment ni honi chahiye use aram se samjhana zabardasty ni...

jiya shock n scared n nodded n left to convince kunj

vansh - Rishabh.. me keh ra hu tumse .. if u think doc twinkl will be best for this you should consult him.. baki kunj ko hum sambhal lenge

rishabh - u sure?

vansh - yes i m... 

rishabh nodded...

vansh - Agar kuch hota h to batana abhi mujhe bhi apne patients check krne h

vansh left .. 

( Tani :- Hmm if there is anyone who wants to know the name of the disease .. to me bata du me nhi batane wali.. Pehle meine socha tha i will but ab i have chnged my mind..  warna medical scienc jhar doge yahi.. and i know nothing about it.. bas itna samajlo kunj has very critical disease which is a rare one as well.. .  so reqquest h ap sabse KRIPIYA KAHANI KO KAHANI KI TARAH LIA KARE USME REALITY LOGIC SENSE ZYADA DHUNDNE KI KOSHISH NA KARE! KYUKI INSAB SE KAHANIO KA KOI LENA DENA NI HOTA 🤣 )

otherhand

Kunj was sitting in his room 

jiya entered 

kunj closed his eyes - jiya.. meine apna answer de dia h!!

jiya - Par vo final decision to ni hosakta na... tum jitna usse bhagne ki koshish kar re ho destiny bar bar use tumhara pass he leke ayegi ...  warna aj doc rishabh... twinkl ka nam suggest ni krte

kunj - Unk suggest kardene se  sab ni hota! meine jab mana kardia to bas kardia

jiya - Har baat pe sirf zid . sirf or srf zid..  is zid me srf tum apna nuksaan kar re ho kunj...

kunj sadly smile - nuksaan naye se hona kuch baki ni h jo hona tha jitna hona tha hochuka!

jiyaa - Kunj ek bar plz ekbar twinkle se baat krle

kunj - usse life me kbhi baat na karu vo intezam krk aya hu me .. kia kia ni kia meine ki vo or meri family mujhse dur hojay mujhe dhundne ki koshish bhi na kare! or ab tum chahty ho ki me...? no.. never  or agar mujhe tumne force kia na to me apna treatment band krwa dunga! KAL KA MARTA AJ MAR JAUNGA!

Jiyaa shockdd -  kunj...

kunj suddenly started having uneasiness...  n a bit of chest pain

jiya shocked - Kunj??

kunj started taking heavy breathes...

jiya immidiately rub his hand - Kunj! kunj please calm down! kunj.. okay ok jo tum chahte ho wohee hoga...  plz calm down..

jiya immidiately gave him medicine...  kunj gulped it with pain...

And slowly he was feeling better ...

Jiyaa lied him down .. and kunj fall asleep...

jiya remember what rishabh said

*Kunj ki halat bht kharab hoty jaa ri h  . humne agar immidiately kuch ni kia to fir kuch karne ko reh ni jaega or ab doc twinkl he kar sakty h kuch*

jiya caress kunj's head - kyu itne zid krte ho kunj kyu  !!

otherhand

Twinkle was in her cabin... working .. seeing all the cases

that time she got a call...

twinkle - Hello

rishabh - Hey doc twinkle..! itz me doc rishabh

twinkle smile - Oh doc rishabh? hii...

Rishabh - Um.. sorry if i disturbed you . as i know ki ap kitni busy rehty h... 

twinkl - No thatz ok.. tell me.. whats the matter

Rishabh sighs - Vo actually ek case k related k baat karni thi...  like i m treating for 1 month now... but kuch khas improvement nhi h.. and his heart condition is not at all good ...   and this type of cases are very rare... so i m not confident enough... 

twinkl tensed - Ohh... aap ek kam kijiye patient ki reports mujhr bhejiye... or me unk liyr ek appointment kardungi tell him to meet me... 

Rishabh - Yahi to problem h doc twinkle vo.. Mumbai ni ana chahta

twinkle - Sorry? what??

Rishabh - exactly .. the patient has completely lost hope...   and ajib si zid pakar k beth gya h ki use ni jana kahi bhi...

twinkle - Well doc rishabh.. to ap use smjhaiye....  isse zyada me kar bhi kia sakty hu

Rishabh - i was telling if u could come over here just for a day.. to check on him...

Twinkle sighs - Doc rishabh ye kuch din to bohot bhari h mujhpar...  vo i... 

Rishabh immediately - oh ya ya I M SO SORRY! YOU ARE GETTING MARRIED RIGHT??

Twinkle stiff at the mention of that but this is the truth of her life  and she needs to accept it!

Twinkle - umm... yaa..

rishabh - Acha thatz okay .. you enjoy your wedding... me apse kuch din baad baat karunga...  tab tak lets just hope his health doesnt detoriates much

twinkle nodded and cuts the call... 

twinkle - Shadi? meri shadi h kuch dino me or me yaha ese ...

twinkle closed her eyes and only kunj's face comes in her way

twinkk gasped and open her eyes with a jerk - No... vo kyu aa jata h bar bar  meri ankho k smne.. mujhe nhi sochna usk bare me!  no... 

while kunj was sleeping .. he opens his eyes - twinkle!

But look arround to realise that he was in his room.. 

kunj smile sadly  and caress the picture of her on his phone - I love you twinkle... i miss you...  i hope tum... us hadse se bahar nikal aayi hongi...  mujhse nafrat krne k bahane he sahi.. age barh chuki hogi...

whilw otherhand

Twinkle got a call from another hospital delhi - Mam ap kal aa ri h na

twinkle shock - what kal?? kal kia

girl - Mam me delhi J.K hospital se bol ri hu  apka  visit fix hua tha kal....  apne 2 mahine phle dates confirm ki thi

twinkl shocked she totally forgot about it

twinkle tensed - Dekhiye i.. i m sorry i cant..  3 din me meri shaadi h i..

Girl - Mam sab kuch fix hochuka h... patients bhi lined up.. kuch to dusrr shehro se bhi aye h.. mam bohot nuksaan hojaega..  plx mam.. plz ap manage karlijiye na

twinkle - are par

girl - Mam kuch aged log h bhi..  ab unko hum kia bolenge ki vo wapas kich months baad aye??

Twinkle sighs - Fine .. i . will come

with that twinkle cuts the call...

next scene

Harsh - What? tumhe delhi jana h kal

juhi - beta kal tumhari mehendi ka function h...  fir sangeet mehendi sab baki h... 

twinkl - Aunty .. meine 2 mahine phle date di thi..  m really sorry.. or bht sare shehro se patients aye h mujhe jna he hoga...

harsh - par vivaan ... vo kia smjhega vo apna sare kam chork yha

Vivaan entered - itz ok uncle... twinkl ne mujhe phle he batadia tha or mujhe koi issue ni h... or wese bhi... nothing is more important than saving a life .!

juhi tensed - phle he itna sab hochuka h ab shadi se 2 din phle tumhe jna h

twinkl hold her hand - trust me aunty me shadi tak aa jaungi... and in rasmo pe na me vishwss karty hu na vivaan ..

vivaan - exctly..  fir bhi apki tassali k liye ap mujhe doubl doubl mehendi sangeet haldi sab krwa lena..

twinkl - uncl me jaa skty hu na

harsh is like a father figure for her without taking permission she dont wana take the chance

harsh sighs - Apna kheyal rkhna or jaldi ana...

twinkl smile and hug him...

vivaan smile - chalo to fir me drop kardeta hu...

twinkle nodded n left while harsh was tensed ..

juhi - Harsh.. kia soch re h .. vo aa jaegi dont wrry ..

harsh - me usko leke worried ni hu.. juhi

juhi - to fr

harsh - Aj ek ajib si baat pata chali aj hospital me....

juhi - Kia?

harsh confused - Hospital k jo dusra fund account h jisme me zyada paise rkhta ni hu... waha pe 60 crores diposit h ...

juhi shocked - mtlb??

harsh - matlab jo paise kunj ne withdraw kiye tha vo usne wapss deposit bhi kardiye

juhi tensed - par use to vo paise chahiye tha na i mean usne to yhi kaha tha

harsh - mujhr bhi kich samj ni aa ra and as us acount k bare me zyada kuch hota ni h to uski details bhi sab 2-3 mahine me ek he bar check krte h...   and tbhi jab kunj ne deposit kia kisiko pta ni chla ...

juhi - To agar use vo paise chahiye he ni tha to .. to liye kyu?? 

harsh - pata ni juhi.. mujhe kuch samaj ni aa ra!

harsh - hosakta h use humne itna kuch keh dia to apne self respect k liye... usne vo wapas rkh diye

juhi in daze - Ya fir shayed use vo paise chahiye he na ho ..! sirf ek tamasha banane k liye usne ye...

Harsh and juhi looked at each other shocked and confused

otherhand in airport..

Twinkl and vivaan reached

vivaan smiled - So bye

twinkle smile - Thanks vivaan

vivaan - for what

twinkl - mujhe humesha support karne k liye! i mean 2 din baad humari shadi h n tum

vivaan - vo vo madam hold on ... tum itne tariffo k pull mat bandho mere .. meine ye isliye kia .. kyuki humare bich kuch esa h nhi... we are not lovers.. and hum dono pehle din se clear tha is chiz ko leke ki . hum kabhi ek dusre pe kuch thopenge nhi...    haq ni jatayenge ... m sure tumhari jgh agar mujhe jana hota to tum bhi use support karty ..

twinkle smile and nodded...

vivaan- Do your work well.. or yaha ki chinta bilkul mat karna . me sab sambhal lunga...

twinkl nodded and left ... for delhi... where a big storm was waiting for her already... 

while otherhand in delhi..

kunj was sitting in his room.. jiya came with soup..

jiya - Kunj... common ye soup pi lo...

kunj making faces - jiya i dont like soups

jiya - janty hu par pina to parega na...  

jiya started feeding him and kunj ate from her hand

Kunj - um kia kaha doc rishabh ne ... KITNA TIME BACHA H MERE PASS??.

jiya shocked - KUNJ! SHUT UP

Kunj smile - mujhe chup karane se fact thori badal jaega.. fact to yahi h na wakt ni h mere pass zyada

jiya angrily - tumhe bakwas he krni h na thik h karo bakwas! me jaa ri hu market! mujhe kuch zarury chize bhi lani h .. 

kunj - Are par kyu.. market se chise lane k liye to tum mujhe jne dety ho yr itna to kar he skta hu me

jiya mocked - No! tum nhi kar sakte! or jo bakwas ki na abhi usk baad to bilkul ni .! tumhe sirf rest karna h ..smjhe! wese bhi tumhari saans phul ri h kuch dino se...

kunj - are par

jiya - kunj.. mujhe doc ne kaha h ki tum kam se kam exert karo to he thik rahega ..so plz.. 

kunj pouts jiya left from there

kunj murmurs - kamal h doctor me hu ki ye! mujhe pta h meri body h... 

otherhand twinkle's flight reached delhi...

Twinkl got a call from hospital - mam apki car airport k bahar he h .. black color ki SUV h .. ap usime beth jaiye vo apko Sidha humare hospital le ayegi...

twinkl - Hmm.. or patients aa gye??

Girl - ji mam .. 

twinkle - okay m coming ... but make sure kal tak sab hojay because kal k baad me chah k bhi ni ruk paungi .

girl - yes mam

twinkle left to her car...

She was going towards hospital but got stuck in traffic

twinkle - god kitni der lgegi

driver - mam.. delhi ki traffic bhi kuch kam ni h wakt to lgega

twinkl - God mujhe bhuk bhi lgi h...  or here i m stuck! hospital jaty to atlesst coffee to milty mujhe

driver - mam pass he ek cafe shop h ap jldi se jake coffee le aiye... tb tk traffic bhi clear hojaega

twinkle - u sure?,

driver - Ji mam..

twinkle nodded n left... 

otherhand

kunj went out of his house - is jiya ka bas chale to sara din mujhe letake rkhe... bed pe.. yr mujhe bhi to thora chalne phirne ka haq h ya ni... ab acha h jab tk vo aty h ek achi si walk mar he ata hu... 

otherhand

twinkle went to the cafe and while she was coming out she saw Jiya there shopping

twinkle shocked... 

twinkk thinks - jiya?  jiya yha!!

her heart jzz crumble her all wounds just become fresh seeing her

jiya's friend - yr jiya tu to bari chupa rustam nikli yr.. tu itne ache se ghar ka rashan wagera kharidlety h hume to pta he ni tha

jiya - Ab halat kab kia sikha de kuch keh to ni skte na..

twinkk was about to go but stopped hearing nxt thing

friend - are par tu kunj ko kyu ni bhejty vo bhi to kar sakta h ye sab

jiya thinks - oh god ab inhe kunj k bare ne bata bhi ni skty kunj ne mana kr rkha h...

jiya - Ab vo kam me busy rehta h to me he kar lety hu...

friends - wao yr kunj is lucky.. that he has u

twinkle hand fisted the words definately angered her and she left from there without hearing further conversation...

Friends - i mean kon karta h ajkal itna apne dost k liye

jiya smile - Kunj ne bhi humesha meri madat ki h yr esa ni we were really good friends from school times..  vo humesha tha jab mujhe uski zarurat thi.. infact mere fashion designing k course ko leke mere family me objection tha unhe ni manzur tha ki me ye career persue karu.. but kunj made them understand..  ki mujhe vo kam karne de jisme mujhe khushi mile...  and Aj jab use meri zarurat h me kese piche hat skty hu..  (thinks) or ese nazuk samay me to bilkul nhi

while twinkle in her car remembering the convo of jiya and her friends

Twinkle trying to control herself - Kyu dikh gayi mujhe vo... nahi dekhna tha mujhe use.. or na he jnna tha ki kesi chal ri h unki married life!! god! pata ni kyu aa gayi me delhi..! mujhr ana he ni chahiye tha!!!

Otherhand..

Kunj was walking and restrd in a tea stall to have some tea

and suddenly his eyes fall on the left over newspapers..

kunj - bhaiyya ye itne sare newspaper?*

man - Haa vo kabari wale se lia h.. vo paper ki zarurat to padty h na... pichle 1 mahine k honge ye

kunj - Ohh acha (smile) but suddenly he noticed twinkle's picture

kunj shocked n he took the paper and his heart feel numb.. it was twinkle's and VIVAAN'S engagement picture .. it was 2 days old paper..   date was mentioned

Kunj shocked... the cup fall from his hand...  looking at the picture ...

kunj - Y..ye? ye vo..

man sitting beside him - Aree ye to vo Mashur doc .. ki sagai k picture h... suna h bohot he alishan arrangments kiye h unki shadi k... 2 din me shadi bhi to h unki ...

kunj shock - Apko.. kese pta?

man - beta mujhe kia puri duniya ko pta h internet pe dkhlo.. social media pe khub charche h ink or interview bhi to h

kunj shattered he felt like his whole world was going upside down....

yes he wanted twinkle to move on.. but he never knew that this reality will kick him so hard ..

kunj slowly left from there... he was walking in daze...

kunj opens his phone and saw the visuals of twinkle and VIVAAN'S engagement...

kunj eyes had tears still he was smiling...

kunj - you.. you moved on twinkle.. finally you moved on.. m really happy for you...

bg :-

Jaane tu meri kya hai
Jaane main tera kya tha
Saath tere har pal
Saath har lamha tha

Jaane kaisi kasak hai
Jaane kaisi tadap hai
Kyun yeh aankhen num hai
Jaane kaisa gham hai

Hai dosti humko yaqeen tha
Dosti aur kuch bhi nahi tha
Par kaise tujhko baatein
Kyun chubhte hain pairon mein kaante

Jaana dil jaana
Kaise maine na jaana
Ke pyaar yehi hai
Yeh jaane tu ya jaane na

Jaana dil jaana
Kaise tune na jaana
Ke pyaar toh hai
Yeh jaane tu ya jaane na

while twinkle was in car she was also in tears

twinkle thinks - Kyu kunj . kyu kia esa tumne . kia mera dil torna sach me.. bohit zarury tha??

Jaane tu meri kya hai
Jaane main tera kya tha
Saath tere har pal
Saath har lamha tha..

Kunj broken voice - m..mujhe to khush hona chahiye... me khush kyu ni ho paa ra.. 

kunj remember all the moments which they spent together ...  her confession his love .  there bickering

suddenly he feel like everything was fading away from him.. his every memory of her..

Kyon aise chubhti hai tujhse doori
Kyon lagti hai zindagi yun adhoori
Chhuaa kisi ne tujhko toh laga ki
Dil mein kisi ne jaise aag laga ke...

Duniya jala di hai meri.

Jaane tu meri kya hai
Jaane main tera kya tha
Saath tere har pal
Saath har lamha tha...

Jaane kaisi kasak hai
Jaane kaisi tadap hai
Kyun ye aankhen num hai
Jaane kaisa gham hai

Jaana dil jaana
Kaise maine na jaana
Ke pyaar yehi hai
Yeh jaane tu ya jaane na

Jaana dil jaana
Kaise tune na jaana
Ke pyaar toh hai
Yeh jaane tu ya jaane na

Kunj was thinking about all these ...  the news of twinkles engagement really came as a shock for him.. which he was not ready to digest so easily...

afterall the feeling that twinkle is finally someone elses is very tough to digest

kunj with tears - humesha khush rehna twinkle .. i will pray for you humesha... shayed tumhare pass ni aa skta .. sath ni reh sakta lekin meri duay humesha tumhare ssath he rahengi...  ..

kunj suddenly felt dizzy...  as his body is not in this condition to cope up with any kind of shock n this news was surely a very shocking one.. may be a small corner of his heart never thought that twinkl could actually move on so easily... 

Kunj tries to compose himself...   but he ends up falling unconscious on the middle of the road...

precap :- Twinkle was told to check a patient who is serious and she was Shocked to see Kunj there!

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